Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
Tout ce qui a un rapport avec l'apprentissage de l'anglais: grammaire, orthographe, aides aux devoirs, phrases etc.
brochure sur mon parc en anglais!
Message de damien21000 posté le 02-12-2005 à 21:13:05 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous !
je dois réaliser une brochure en anglais sur mon parc idéale, j'ai donc choisi "le parc aux souvenirs", j'ai fais ma traduction en anglais, or je pense qu'il reste encore quelques fautes, pourriez vous m'aider à les corriger ???? merçi beaucoup, c'est vraiment très gentil de m'aider !!!
voici mon textes'il y a des modifs à faire dans la tournure des phrases, c'est sans problème!!) merci !bcp !
The park with the memories!
Indeed, the world of your ancestors opens these doors to you, so that you can Re-plunge yourselves in the universe of the Nineties. This splendid site of greenery, located at the heart even of Paris, combines an imposing architecture with a coloured vegetation and with calms resting.
welcome in the world of the Nineties!
This park currently frequentable by any types of individuals, was at the time, only reserved for a middle-class class, which came to walk there and to divert there Thursday and Sundays afternoon.
This days, this place was renovated very little, the goal being to keep it nearest to the reality of these years. For that, it was necessary an intense maintenance, so that the buildings and the plants are not degraded.
It is a garden which had been carried out typically "to the Frenchwoman", thanks to a perfect symmetry and rectilinear alleys and solid masses.
Many activities are proposed there, but, as in time, these leisures are cut out in various classes:
-1/The class of the men
All the men can taken part in the following activities:
-Game of bowls: located at the south of the park, close to the small bar, this zone was arranged in order to accomodate several teams, for tournaments without end. You draw or you points!!!!
-The criket: Located in the center of the garden, on a vast grass zone, practical for part of golf to English, on a wet and refreshing ground.
2/The class of the women
While these Messrs play, Mesdames can:
- to make the turn of the park in the barouche, the hair in the wind!!!!
- to release themselves, reflect or remember, sitted on splendid benches out of stone or wooden.
- to visit the various historic buildings.
- to gather beautiful tulip bunchs.
- or, to refresh itself close to a brook, with a transparent water.
3/ but what makes the children?
Are held with their diposition, many airs of wood plays, typical of the time. But also, of the turns of merry-go-round, the discovery of fauna and the wild flora...
For the small greedy ones, every hour ago, a merchant of ices and candies, which ravels in the park.
This park is thus a place of escape familliale, mainly based on the adventure playgrounds out of wood for the children, and on the entertainments and the memories for the parents.
we await you impatiently in this natural world, far from modern town planning!!
-------------------
Edité par emy64 le 02-12-2005 21:19
A la demande de webmaster il est demandé aux membres et aux modérateurs de ne plus corriger les textes complets des devoirs ni les dissertations:
Lien Internet
Message de damien21000 posté le 02-12-2005 à 21:13:05 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous !
je dois réaliser une brochure en anglais sur mon parc idéale, j'ai donc choisi "le parc aux souvenirs", j'ai fais ma traduction en anglais, or je pense qu'il reste encore quelques fautes, pourriez vous m'aider à les corriger ???? merçi beaucoup, c'est vraiment très gentil de m'aider !!!
voici mon textes'il y a des modifs à faire dans la tournure des phrases, c'est sans problème!!) merci !bcp !
The park with the memories!
Indeed, the world of your ancestors opens these doors to you, so that you can Re-plunge yourselves in the universe of the Nineties. This splendid site of greenery, located at the heart even of Paris, combines an imposing architecture with a coloured vegetation and with calms resting.
welcome in the world of the Nineties!
This park currently frequentable by any types of individuals, was at the time, only reserved for a middle-class class, which came to walk there and to divert there Thursday and Sundays afternoon.
This days, this place was renovated very little, the goal being to keep it nearest to the reality of these years. For that, it was necessary an intense maintenance, so that the buildings and the plants are not degraded.
It is a garden which had been carried out typically "to the Frenchwoman", thanks to a perfect symmetry and rectilinear alleys and solid masses.
Many activities are proposed there, but, as in time, these leisures are cut out in various classes:
-1/The class of the men
All the men can taken part in the following activities:
-Game of bowls: located at the south of the park, close to the small bar, this zone was arranged in order to accomodate several teams, for tournaments without end. You draw or you points!!!!
-The criket: Located in the center of the garden, on a vast grass zone, practical for part of golf to English, on a wet and refreshing ground.
2/The class of the women
While these Messrs play, Mesdames can:
- to make the turn of the park in the barouche, the hair in the wind!!!!
- to release themselves, reflect or remember, sitted on splendid benches out of stone or wooden.
- to visit the various historic buildings.
- to gather beautiful tulip bunchs.
- or, to refresh itself close to a brook, with a transparent water.
3/ but what makes the children?
Are held with their diposition, many airs of wood plays, typical of the time. But also, of the turns of merry-go-round, the discovery of fauna and the wild flora...
For the small greedy ones, every hour ago, a merchant of ices and candies, which ravels in the park.
This park is thus a place of escape familliale, mainly based on the adventure playgrounds out of wood for the children, and on the entertainments and the memories for the parents.
we await you impatiently in this natural world, far from modern town planning!!
-------------------
Edité par emy64 le 02-12-2005 21:19
A la demande de webmaster il est demandé aux membres et aux modérateurs de ne plus corriger les textes complets des devoirs ni les dissertations:
Lien Internet