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Music essay
Message de price posté le 09-03-2007 à 21:47:40 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour.
Voilà j'ai un essai à faire et jevoudrais souhaiterais que vous me corrigiez une partie de ce que j'ai fait je ne mets pas tout juste une partie où je ne suis pas tres sûr.
Le sujet est le suivant:"We can live without music.But less well.Do you agree with this statement? how important is music to you ?"
Music exist for long-past.Music was born in United States and started as the end of the 19th century.Jazz is the first to appear.
For my part music is an art, creative intuition playing on the time and emotion.How important music in daily life?
First I would say that music is very important for me.I coudn't live without music.Music makes many emotions and sensations when you listen music For example When I listen ... I'm relaxing or when I listen... I'm happy.So Music makes me relaxing, happy,dancing.Music allows us to relax, to see things differently, to recover, to be get higher spirits.My friend for example listens music for forget problem with family or school.In the song "Without you" of Mariah carey she says "If living is without you I can’t live "I say "If living is without music I can't live".
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Secontly I would say Some people can live without music.
Music is noisy for some people
Music can interfere with some people because people likes silence (peut gené)
I think some people who doesn't like music is a worker or alone
Or some people never listen music's style for example rap french ,Rnb and people will say he doesn't like this music it's normal if you don't listen.
Conclusion:
If one likes music one can choose music to listen and make it appreciate with others.
Voilà une dernière question est-ce que ça colle au sujet ??
Merci d'avance il me le faut pour ce soir
Bye
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Modifié par whynot95 le 10-03-2007 04:07
Message de price posté le 09-03-2007 à 21:47:40 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour.
Voilà j'ai un essai à faire et je
Le sujet est le suivant:"We can live without music.But less well.Do you agree with this statement? how important is music to you ?"
Music exist for long-past.Music was born in United States and started as the end of the 19th century.Jazz is the first to appear.
For my part music is an art, creative intuition playing on the time and emotion.How important music in daily life?
First I would say that music is very important for me.I coudn't live without music.Music makes many emotions and sensations when you listen music For example When I listen ... I'm relaxing or when I listen... I'm happy.So Music makes me relaxing, happy,dancing.Music allows us to relax, to see things differently, to recover, to be get higher spirits.My friend for example listens music for forget problem with family or school.In the song "Without you" of Mariah carey she says "If living is without you I can’t live "I say "If living is without music I can't live".
...
Secontly I would say Some people can live without music.
Music is noisy for some people
Music can interfere with some people because people likes silence (peut gené)
I think some people who doesn't like music is a worker or alone
Or some people never listen music's style for example rap french ,Rnb and people will say he doesn't like this music it's normal if you don't listen.
Conclusion:
If one likes music one can choose music to listen and make it appreciate with others.
Voilà une dernière question est-ce que ça colle au sujet ??
Merci d'avance il me le faut pour ce soir
Bye
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Modifié par whynot95 le 10-03-2007 04:07
Réponse: Music essay de coralie96, postée le 09-03-2007 à 23:03:25 (S | E)
Hi
Just a few corrections, not all.
Music started/began a long time ago
Music triggers many emotions
My friend listens to music to forget
people like
people who don't
make others appreciate it.
Hope this is of help to you, sorry I can't help more than that
Réponse: Music essay de price, postée le 10-03-2007 à 07:51:41 (S | E)
Thank you very much
Bye
Réponse: Music essay de marlond, postée le 10-03-2007 à 22:00:27 (S | E)
Music has existed for years. Music was born in United States and started as the end of the 19th century. (Was it? Music has existed in some variety for thousands of years! You could possibly argue that ‘modern music’ created at the time you say, but definitely not all music. Think about classical music…) Jazz WAS the first to appear.
For my part music is an art, creative intuition playing on the time and emotion. How important IS music in daily life?
FirstLY I would say that music is very important for me. I coudn't live without music. Music TRIGGERS many emotions and sensations when you listen TO IT, for example when I listen ... I'm relaxing or when I listen... I'm happy. So Music makes me RELAXED, happy, AND MAKES ME (WANT TO) DANCE. Music allows us to relax, to see things differently, to recover, to LIFT OUR SPIRITS. My friend listens TO music TO forget PROBLEMS IN HIS FAMILY OR AT SCHOOL In the song "Without you" BY Mariah Carey she says "If living is without you I can’t live "I say "If living is without music I can't live".
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SeconDly, I would say Some people can live without music.
Music is JUST NOISE for some people
Music can interfere with some people because people like silence (peut gené)
I think people who DON’T like music ARE JUST ALONE OR ALWAYS WORKING.
FURTHERMORE, some people never listen TO MUSIC OF A CERTAIN STYLE, for example rap, French MUSIC ,R’n’b and people will say he doesn't like this music it's normal if you don't listen. (? – I DON’T UNDERSTAND THE LAST BIT)
Conclusion:
If one likes music one can choose music to listen TO and make OTHERS APPRECIATE IT.
INDISPENSABLES : 