correction rédaction
Message de kichtoune posté le 12-01-2005 à 15:34:07 (S | E | F | I)
Pouvez vous me corriger ma rédaction d'anglais svp?


I have never rebelled against authority, either at home or at school. Of-course it has happened to me to quarrel me with my parents or my brother or not to be of the same opinion of a professor but today no memory of rebellion reappear to my mind. I know I am not a child of chorus but it is the truth! Maybe, in the future, I will rebel against my boss, against politicians and the society or against the police, I don't know but for now I am not an ecologist militant who revolt against the destruction in the amazony's wood. Rebellion is good for right reasons but bad when it is vandalism, insolence, or disrespect of highway code! For the rebellion can lead to punishments, the jail, or maybe death?! In any case, I live my own life and if one day I must rebel I will wait the opportunity which will present itself to me.

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Edité par bridg le 12-01-2005 15:37