Welcome Tea-room/Dialogue

Welcome Tea-room/Dialogue
Message de jane37 posté le 10-11-2017 à 10:25:01 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.
Un dialogue à vérifier (Cohérence ,Vocabulaire et grammaire ) s'il vous plait.
Merci pour votre aide.

Scarlett tea time : welcome

Hostess:Good afternoon, welcome to Scarlett tea time.Have you reserved?
J: Good afternoon, yes we booked on behalf of April,for 2 people.
H: Is this table suitable for you?
J: Does that suit you Kate?
K: That's perfect, thank you.
H: Here is the card of our different teas and pastries.
J: Thank you
K: Thank you …… Oh the card is nice, I'm having trouble choosing.
J: As far as I'm concerned, I know what I'm going to take.
H: Have you chosen?
J: I'll take a Lady Grey and scones please.
H: And for you Madam?
K: A London Fog tea and apple pie please. It’s seam delicious.
H: Very good choice , ladis,… thank you.
K: So Jane, tell me about this new sport, you shoot at the bow now!
J: Hey yes my dear I think I'm Robin Hood!
H: Excuse me Ladies, Here is Lady Grey tea and scones for you madam,and a London Fog tea and an apple pie for you madam.
J & K: Thank you
H: Your welcome, enjoy your tea.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-11-2017 11:09

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Réponse : Welcome Tea-room/Dialogue de badge642, postée le 11-11-2017 à 02:13:07 (S | E)
Hostess:Good afternoon, welcome to Scarlett tea time.Have you reserved?
J: Good afternoon, yes we booked on behalf of April,for 2 people.
Good afternoon. Yes, we booked under the name of April, for 2 people.
H: Is this table suitable for you?
J: Does that suit you Kate?
K: That's perfect, thank you.
H: Here is the card of our different teas and pastries.
Here is the menu of our different teas and pastries.
J: Thank you
K: Thank you …… Oh the card is nice, I'm having trouble choosing.
carte d'un restaurant= menu
J: As far as I'm concerned, I know what I'm going to take.
As far as I'm concerned, I know what I'm going to have.
H: Have you chosen?
J: I'll take a Lady Grey and scones please.
prendre un repas, thé, café, etc.= to have a...
H: And for you, Madam? Toujours une virgule ici
K: A London Fog tea and apple pie please. It’s seam delicious.
A London Fog tea and (a slice of) apple pie, please. It sounds delicious.
H: Very good choice , ladis,… thank you.
Very good choice, ladies... thank you.
K: So Jane, tell me about this new sport, you shoot at the bow now!
J: Hey yes my dear I think I'm Robin Hood!
Hey yes My dear, tell me about this new sport, you do archery now. (Je suppose que tu veux dire le tir à l'arc= archery?)
H: Excuse me Ladies, Here is Lady Grey tea and scones for you madam,and a London Fog tea and an apple pie for you madam.
Excuse me, ladies. Here is your Lady Grey tea and scones for you, madam, and a London Fog tea and apple pie for you, madam.
J & K: Thank you
H: Your welcome, enjoy your tea.
You're welcome. Enjoy your tea.

J'espère que ça t'aide!

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Réponse : Welcome Tea-room/Dialogue de jane37, postée le 11-11-2017 à 05:20:40 (S | E)
Merci badge642. Une correction détaillée qui m'aide beaucoup. Archery= tir à l'arc (dans le dictionnaire Oxford English :shooting with a bow and arrows .)je ne sais pas si il existe un autre terme .Merci encore

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