Text/ Online learning

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Message de emma22 posté le 30-03-2019 à 10:38:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
étant en licence de Langues Etrangères Appliquées je m'entraîne à écrire des textes en anglais afin d'améliorer ma maîtrise de cette langue. Je me demandais si c'était possible d'avoir un avis sur ce texte au niveau de la syntaxe et de la tournure de mes phrases et une éventuelle correction.
Merci d'avance. Cordialement.
Emma

Topic : On-line learning

Firstly, with on-line learning the students can learn anywhere and at anytime 24 (twenty-four) hours a day a 7 (seven) days a week. All they need is an access to internet. With that kind of learning the students can learn what they really need and they can select the subjects they are interesting in at the moment. It can also reduces the cost of travel because these students can stay at home. Moreover a student at school must adept to the rythm of the group therefore he doesn't necessarly follow all the explanations and can feel lost. With on-line learning this cannot happened because it's more flexible, the students can work as much as they need on a subject if they didn't understand it, they can make more exercices, and watch two or three times the on-line lesson.

However it is maybe not made for every students. Indeed on-line learning cannot offer human interaction and some students need to interact with the teacher to better understand with more explanations and a different way to explain the problem. Moreover it cannot replace hand-learning because for example in science the students need a practical component.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-03-2019 10:41

Réponse : Text/ Online learning de gerondif, postée le 30-03-2019 à 15:25:09 (S | E)
Bonjour
erreurs en bleu
Topic : On-line learning

Firstly, with on-line learning(virgule) the(à enlever quand on parle en général) students can learn anywhere and at any time (en deux mots) 24 (twenty-four) hours a day and 7 (seven) days a week. All they need is an access to the internet. With that kind of learning(virgule) ~~the~~ students can learn what they really need( to learn)and they can select the subjects they are interesting(intéressés, pas intéressants) in at the moment (at that particular time). It can also reduces(infinitif sans to derrière can !!) the cost of travel because these students can stay at home. Moreover a student at school must adept(adapt) to the rythm of the group therefore he doesn't necessarly follow all the explanations and can feel lost. With on-line learning this cannot happened(base verbale derrière can !!) because it's more flexible, the students can work as much (as long) as they need on a subject if they didn't understand it the first time, they can make more exercices (the teacher makes, invents the test, the students do it), and watch the on-line lesson two or three times.

However it is maybe( à placer devant it) not made for every students(every + singulier). Indeed on-line learning cannot offer human interaction and some students need to interact with the teacher to better understand with more explanations and a different way to explain(of + ing) the problem. Moreover it cannot replace hand-learning because for example in science the students need a practical component.

Réponse : Text/ Online learning de emma22, postée le 30-03-2019 à 22:23:25 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

Je vous remercie pour les explications concernant mes erreurs

Cordialement

Emma

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