Writing2/aide

Writing2/aide
Message de hayti posté le 20-04-2019 à 22:20:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'aimerais bien que vous corrigiez mes erreurs.
Merci d'avance.
Dear teacher.
I am very happy to know that our school has created different clubs. I really want to join the sport club for many reasons. The first one is that sports help us to relax and forget daily stress caused by steady or other problems. Also, practicing sports empower the body and develop mental skills. Moreover we feel so happy while playing football, handball, basketball... With our classmates or teenagers in our school.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-04-2019 22:28

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Réponse : Writing2/aide de here4u, postée le 21-04-2019 à 09:52:04 (S | E)
Hello!

Dear teacher.
I am very happy to know that our school has created different clubs. I really want to join the sport club for many reasons. The first one is that sports help us to relax and forget daily stress caused by steady or other problems. Also, practicing sports empower the body and develop mental skills. Moreover we(would?) feel so happy while playing football, handball, basketball...With our classmates or (other) teenagers in our school.
(Here, you're supposed to give your motivations... Why didn't you use "I"?

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Réponse : Writing2/aide de hayti, postée le 21-04-2019 à 10:30:02 (S | E)
Ravie de recevoir votre réponse. Merci infiniment.

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