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    Travail Anglais suite
    Message de zubok posté le 16-04-2007 à 12:08:50 (S | E | F | I)

    Merci pour la première partie, je viens de la corriger.
    Quelqu'un pourrait me dire si j'ai autant de fautes dans celle-ci? ^^
    Merci


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    I think that Cannabis and all other drugs are useless. Nobody should begin to some smoke joints just because it seems funny. Consequences are horrible and it’ difficult to stop smoking.
    A lot of children begin to smoke joints at school with friends who have smoked for ages. They use drugs because they want to show that they are strong. But I think that they are just stupid because a real friend would never suggest you a joint.
    I don’t think that legalization of “soft” drugs, like in Holland, is great. It incites adolescents to try them when they are 18 years old.
    The drug market is a solution for children, adolescents and adults who need money. They become dealers then.
    An other problem with drugs is that it’s dangerous for the health. For example a smoker of joints has 55 % more chances to have a lung cancer.
    Children should be aware about drugs’ risks. They should be informed when they’re young at schools. They must know that drugs bring nothing good.
    I know that it’s hard to stop this drug market because you can’t control your children all the time, but they must be warned.



    Réponse: Travail Anglais suite de marlond, postée le 17-04-2007 à 00:38:04 (S | E)
    I think that Cannabis and all other drugs are useless. Nobody should begin to some smoke joints just because it seems funny. Consequences are horrible and it’ difficult to stop smoking.
    - no capital letter for 'cannabis'.
    - I think you mean 'fun', not 'funny'
    - 'THE consequences are...'
    - 'It'S'

    A lot of children begin to smoke joints at school with friends who have smoked for ages. They use drugs because they want to show that they are strong. But I think that they are just stupid because a real friend would never suggest you a joint.
    - 'strong' isn't the right word. 'cool' is better.
    - 'would never suggest you SMOKE a joint'

    I don’t think that legalization of “soft” drugs, like in Holland, is great. It incites adolescents to try them when they are 18 years old.
    - 'is a good idea' rather than 'is great'
    - 'encourages' rather than 'incites'
    - 'teenagers' rather than 'adolescents'

    The drug market is a solution for children, adolescents and adults who need money. They become dealers then.
    - 'the drugs market'
    - 'teenagers' rather than 'adolescents'
    - 'they soon become dealers if they need more money' is better for the last sentence.

    An other problem with drugs is that it’s dangerous for the health. For example a smoker of joints has 55 % more chances to have a lung cancer.
    - 'dangerous for the health' isn't correct grammar. 'dangerous for your/one's health'.
    - 'has a 55% higher chance of developing lung cancer'

    Children should be aware about drugs’ risks. They should be informed when they’re young at schools. They must know that drugs bring nothing good.
    - 'the risk of drugs' is better.

    I know that it’s hard to stop this drug market because you can’t control your children all the time, but they must be warned.




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