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Message de yukijiwon posté le 11-03-2008 à 02:22:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'aurai besoin d'une petite correction ^^
Et voir si mes phrases sont bien tournées
Merci
Dear Sir,
Thank you for your enquiry regarding exhibition of
our Monster connection cables.
Enclosed please find our catalogue together with our
range of products, price-list and terms and conditions for your review.
We are confident that you will find the answers you
have requests.
Please read the terms and conditions before accepting
our reply as they are quite important, and help you
understand what you need to know about our products.
You will also see from the price-list that we take care of
all freight and insurance costs.
The prices we have offered are really the best with the
good quality items. And we will also provide you with
our best quotation for a full container.
We are offering to our existing customers a 15%
discount on orders of cables from our new range.
When you have seen the sample, we are sure you will agree that is unique both in opportunity.
I look forward to doing business with your company in the future
Yours Faithfully,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-03-2008 06:36
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Message de yukijiwon posté le 11-03-2008 à 02:22:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'aurai besoin d'une petite correction ^^
Et voir si mes phrases sont bien tournées
Merci
Dear Sir,
Thank you for your enquiry regarding exhibition of
our Monster connection cables.
Enclosed please find our catalogue together with our
range of products, price-list and terms and conditions for your review.
We are confident that you will find the answers you
have requests.
Please read the terms and conditions before accepting
our reply as they are quite important, and help you
understand what you need to know about our products.
You will also see from the price-list that we take care of
all freight and insurance costs.
The prices we have offered are really the best with the
good quality items. And we will also provide you with
our best quotation for a full container.
We are offering to our existing customers a 15%
discount on orders of cables from our new range.
When you have seen the sample, we are sure you will agree that is unique both in opportunity.
I look forward to doing business with your company in the future
Yours Faithfully,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-03-2008 06:36
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Réponse: Lettre à corriger de yukijiwon, postée le 11-03-2008 à 02:25:44 (S | E)
new customer au lieu de existing
Réponse: Lettre à corriger de pvc102000, postée le 11-03-2008 à 03:38:54 (S | E)
Dear Sir,
Thank you for your INQUIRY (au lieu de "enquiry") regarding THE exhibition of our Monster connection cables. Enclosed please find our CATALOG (au lieu "catalogue") together with our range of products, PRICE LIST (au lieu de "price-list") and terms and conditions for your review. We are confident that you will find the answers you have REQUESTED (au lieu de "requests"). Please read the terms and conditions before accepting our reply as they are quite important, and WILL help you understand what you need to know about our products. You will also see from the PRICE LIST (au lieu de "price-list") that we take care of all freight and insurance costs. The prices we have offered are really the best with the good quality items. And we will also provide you with our best quotation for a full container. We are offering to our existing customers a 15% discount on orders of cables from our new range.
WHEN YOU SEE OUR SAMPLE (au lieu de "When you have seen the sample"), 'we are sure you will agree that is unique both in opportunity'. (Il y'a quelque chose qui manque dans cette phrase... Normalement, Quand on utilise le mot "both", il y'a deux choses en jeu, la phrase n'indique que "opportunity"... A moins que ce que vous voulez dire implique "opportunity" and "price", dans ce cas, vous diriez:"we are sure you'll agree that it is unique in both price and opportunity").
I look forward to doing business with your company in the future
Yours Faithfully, (vous pouvez aussi utiliser "Sincerely," au lieu de "Yours Faithfully," c'est pas faux d'utiliser "Yours Faithfully," mais "sincerely," est plus prevalent).
J'espère que cela vous aide un peu.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-03-2008 06:35
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