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The Landlady
Message de marion038 posté le 03-04-2008 à 22:01:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous !!
Y a-t-il des erreurs dans ce texte ?!
The Landlady
Roal Dahl
The main character is billy Weaver. He is a seventeen year old young man which arrives by train to Londres at Bath, where has had a new job. (We can think that this story happens the winter, and in the evening, because billy arrives to Bath it was about nine o'clock in the evening, the air was cold, and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks). He tries to find a not dear hotel. Somebody advises to him “ The bell and Dragon” But a other house attracts his attention. This house is lovely, homely. He decides to go to the hotel but a force attracted him, he can’t control oneself and he knockes at the door. A woman opens the door rapidly. She seems pleasant. The housewife gives her rate who are very cheap. Despite of that, her house remain empty. The young man thinks this situation is odd. But he decides to stay.The wife shows his bedroom and she insists for he enrols his name in a book where two names appear. They seem familiar and he asks the women who are this two persons. The housewife tries to avoid the topic of conversation. Finally she answers that they was residents and that they very look like him. At this moment she talks in the past.
Then he notices that her domestics animals (“the parrot and the dog”) are stuff and she lets emply that the two young boys are still in her house ...
In us point of view, the tea is a poison for dope him and after,maybe, she embalms Billy Weaber.
The two short-stories begin with a banal situation. In the first story, lamb to the slaughter, it’s a wife who waits for her husband in their house. In the second story, landlady, it’s a young man who tries to find accommodation.
Then, The two murderers are womens and seem crazy and suspect.
They use exceptionals techniques for kill. The first kills her husband with a leg of lamb and the second wife kills her resident with poison and after she embalms her victims. They are very intelligent and clever.They are manipulator because their victims have confiance and they don’t imagine that what happened then.
Moreover, The end of the two short-stories is unexpected.
Merci d'avance !!
Message de marion038 posté le 03-04-2008 à 22:01:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous !!
Y a-t-il des erreurs dans ce texte ?!
The Landlady
Roal Dahl
The main character is billy Weaver. He is a seventeen year old young man which arrives by train to Londres at Bath, where has had a new job. (We can think that this story happens the winter, and in the evening, because billy arrives to Bath it was about nine o'clock in the evening, the air was cold, and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks). He tries to find a not dear hotel. Somebody advises to him “ The bell and Dragon” But a other house attracts his attention. This house is lovely, homely. He decides to go to the hotel but a force attracted him, he can’t control oneself and he knockes at the door. A woman opens the door rapidly. She seems pleasant. The housewife gives her rate who are very cheap. Despite of that, her house remain empty. The young man thinks this situation is odd. But he decides to stay.The wife shows his bedroom and she insists for he enrols his name in a book where two names appear. They seem familiar and he asks the women who are this two persons. The housewife tries to avoid the topic of conversation. Finally she answers that they was residents and that they very look like him. At this moment she talks in the past.
Then he notices that her domestics animals (“the parrot and the dog”) are stuff and she lets emply that the two young boys are still in her house ...
In us point of view, the tea is a poison for dope him and after,maybe, she embalms Billy Weaber.
The two short-stories begin with a banal situation. In the first story, lamb to the slaughter, it’s a wife who waits for her husband in their house. In the second story, landlady, it’s a young man who tries to find accommodation.
Then, The two murderers are womens and seem crazy and suspect.
They use exceptionals techniques for kill. The first kills her husband with a leg of lamb and the second wife kills her resident with poison and after she embalms her victims. They are very intelligent and clever.They are manipulator because their victims have confiance and they don’t imagine that what happened then.
Moreover, The end of the two short-stories is unexpected.
Merci d'avance !!
Réponse: The Landlady de gee, postée le 03-04-2008 à 22:13:02 (S | E)
question de Marion: Y a-t-il des erreurs dans ce texte ?!
réponse d'un quidam: Oui, Marion.
Réponse: The Landlady de lucile83, postée le 04-04-2008 à 08:41:30 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Je suppose que vous attendez une correction ...je commence pour une petite partie.
The main character is billy
Weaver. He is a seventeen year old young man which arrives by train to Londres at Bath, where.. has had a new job. (We can think that this story happens the winter, and in the evening, because billy arrives to Bath it was about nine o'clock in the evening, the air was cold, and the wind was like a flat blade of ice on his cheeks). He tries to find a (not dear) hotel. Somebody advises to him “ The bell and Dragon” But a other house attracts his attention. This house is lovely, homely. He decides to go to the hotel but a force attracted him, he can’t control oneself and he knockes at the door. A woman opens the door rapidly. She seems pleasant.Ce sont les plus grosses fautes.
See you
Réponse: The Landlady de marion038, postée le 05-04-2008 à 12:52:29 (S | E)
merci pour votre aide !!
j'essaye de m'améliorer avec ce site qui est vraiment génial !!
continuez comme cela, ça aide beaucoup de monde !
Réponse: The Landlady de maloobool, postée le 08-04-2008 à 17:21:21 (S | E)
(...)She seems pleasant.The housewife gives her rate who are
(is) very cheap. Despite of that, her house remain(s) empty. The young man thinks this situation is odd. But he decides to stay(here).The wife shows (him his)his bedroom and she insists for he enrols(put/write) his name in a book where two names appear(ed). They seem familiar and he asks the women who are this two persons. The housewife tries to avoid the topic of conversation. Finally she answers that they was residents and that they very look like him. At this moment she talks in the past.Then he notices that her domestics animals (“the parrot and the dog”) are stuff and she lets emply(understand) that the two young boys are still in her house ...
Je sais pas trop si c'est juste et je vois d'autres fautes mais je préfère rien mettre, de peur que ce soit encore faux. Mais j'ai l'impression qu'il y a des problèmes de temps. Tu devrais peut etre mettre tous tes verbes au passé plutôt qu'au présent, ca fait bizarre. j'ai fait ce que j'ai pu.
Malo0
Réponse: The Landlady de jean31, postée le 08-04-2008 à 19:09:52 (S | E)
Voici la suite des petites balises jaunes...
Tu as du pain sur la planche !
The housewife gives her rate who
are very cheap. Despite of that, her house remain empty. The young man thinks this situation is odd. But he decides to stay.The wife shows his bedroom and she insists for he enrols his name in a book where two names appear. They seem familiar and he asks the women who are this two persons. The housewife tries to avoid the topic of conversation. Finally she answers that they was residents and that they very look like him. At this moment she talks in the past.Then he notices that her domestics
animals (“the parrot and the dog”) are stuff and she lets emply that the two young boys are still in her house ...In us
point of view, the tea is a poison for dope him and after,maybe, she embalms Billy Weaber.The two short-stories begin with a banal situation. In the first story, lamb to the slaughter, it’s a wife who waits for her husband in their house. In the second story, landlady, it’s a young man who tries to find accommodation.
Then, The two murderers are womens
and seem crazy and suspect.They use exceptionals
techniques for kill. The first kills her husband with a leg of lamb and the second wife kills her resident with poison and after she embalms her victims. They are very intelligent and clever.They are manipulator because their victims have confiance and they don’t imagine that what happened then.Moreover, The end of the two short-stories is unexpected.
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