Comme des milliers de personnes, recevez gratuitement chaque semaine << Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En bas
Please help me !
Message de mimitigrou posté le 28-05-2008 à 09:21:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous, je vais avoir un entretien d'embauche et on risque de me demander de me présenter en Anglais. Seulement mon Anglais est vraiment pas terrible. Pouvez vous me dire si ma présentation est correcte ? je postule dans un aéroport en tant que billettiste. Merci à tous d'avance.
My name's is Karen, I'm twenty-six years old. I was born in firminy but I live in Lyon for fifteen years, where I studied.
For three years I'm studied Chinese in university. After that, I'm interessed in Tourism, because I hope I'll work in this domain (ce secteur ou domaine). I have worked for two month in Museum when I was guided tour (où j'ai fait des visites guidées).
I enjoy learn foreign languages, particulary the Asian languages. And I'm member of association for animal's which live in refuge.
Message de mimitigrou posté le 28-05-2008 à 09:21:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous, je vais avoir un entretien d'embauche et on risque de me demander de me présenter en Anglais. Seulement mon Anglais est vraiment pas terrible. Pouvez vous me dire si ma présentation est correcte ? je postule dans un aéroport en tant que billettiste. Merci à tous d'avance.
My name's is Karen, I'm twenty-six years old. I was born in firminy but I live in Lyon for fifteen years, where I studied.
For three years I'm studied Chinese in university. After that, I'm interessed in Tourism, because I hope I'll work in this domain (ce secteur ou domaine). I have worked for two month in Museum when I was guided tour (où j'ai fait des visites guidées).
I enjoy learn foreign languages, particulary the Asian languages. And I'm member of association for animal's which live in refuge.
Réponse: Please help me ! de babyscot59, postée le 28-05-2008 à 09:49:02 (S | E)
My name is Karen, I'm twenty-six years old. I was born in Firminy but I have been living in Lyon for fifteen years, where I studied.
For three years I have studied Chinese in university. After that, I'm interested in Tourism, because I hope I'll work in this field (ce secteur ou domaine). I have worked for two month in a Museum when I was a guide(où j'ai fait des visites guidées).
I enjoy learning foreign languages, particulary the Asian languages. And I'm a volunteer in a pet refuge.
Et voilà je pense que tout est bon
sebastien
Réponse: Please help me ! de cielbleu242, postée le 29-05-2008 à 01:19:31 (S | E)
My name is Karen [and] I'm twenty-six years old. I was born in Firminy but I have been living in Lyon for fifteen years, where I studied.
For three years I have studied Chinese at the university (dites quelle université). After that, [I hope to work in tourism because I'm interested in this field] (ce secteur ou domaine). I have worked for two month[s] in a [m]useum [where] I was a guide(où j'ai fait des visites guidées).
I enjoy learning foreign languages, [particularly] the Asian languages. I'm [also] a volunteer [at] a pet refuge.
Bon fait et très intéressant.
Les choses en [] sont les corrections.
Cielbleu
Réponse: Please help me ! de mimitigrou, postée le 29-05-2008 à 09:19:46 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup de votre aide et de votre correction
Réponse: Please help me ! de eileen6, postée le 29-05-2008 à 09:44:36 (S | E)
My name is Karen, I'm twenty-six years old. I was born in Firminy but I have been living in Lyon for fifteen years, where I studied.
I studied Chinese at university (ou at the University of ...........) for three years. I would like to work in tourism, as I am interested in that field. I worked for two months in a museum where I was a tour guide. I enjoy learning foreign languages, particularly the Asian languages. I'm also a volunteer at a pet refuge (ou 'rescue centre' - 'refuge' est plus american et 'rescue centre' est plus anglais).
Bon courage
Eileen
INDISPENSABLES : 