Mettre en ordre (1)
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Message de elii-se posté le 18-09-2008 à 13:47:33 (S | E | F)
Mon exercice consistait à remettre en ordre les phrases d'un texte, voici ma proposition, que pensez-vous de cet ordre?
“Every man has two countries: his own and France”
Many people agree with Mirabeau.
It is a beautiful country with a lot of empty space.
Wonderful empty space is great therapy for the pressures of civilization.
Walking alone across a wide, white sandy beach can make you and your worries seem small.
Some would like to include Scotland as well.
The disadvantage is that the weather is often wet.
But in late spring or early autumn, Scotland is at its best.
Scotland’s beauty will enchant you and you will be sure to want to return there.
The scenery is magnificent in every part of the country, and the cities, too, are full of interest.
Edinburgh is a charming, sophisticated city.
Glasgow possesses some outstanding art galleries.
Réponse: Mettre en ordre de chrislondon, postée le 19-09-2008 à 19:13:12 (S | E)
They seem fine to me. Was 'space' in the singular or the plural? Perhaps it would be a good idea to include the original exercise.
Réponse: Mettre en ordre de elii-se, postée le 19-09-2008 à 19:39:14 (S | E)