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Dear Philippe/Correction
Message de doggie posté le 21-09-2008 à 19:33:06 (S | E | F)
Rebonjour,
Comme vous le savez il y a deux parties au writing. Pouvez-vous me corriger s'il vous plaît ?
Sujet :
Write an answer to your friend. This is a part of the letter you receive :
I always go shopping with my friends at the weekend. What do you like buying when you go shopping ? What kinf of shops are there near where you live ?
Texte :
22nd september
Dear Philippe,
Thanks for writing me back! For answering your quesion, I love buying books. I often go shopping with my mother who buys food book. Near the place I live we can find a lot of kind of shops beacause I live in the centre of Dublin? However, it's quite difficult to find a furniture shop ! For you, it's not diffficult, too. I include somme photos of my town showing different shops. I hope you will come at home in holiday. Kiss your family for me. See you soon
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Merci d'avance
Doggie
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Modifié par bridg le 21-09-2008 20:32
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Réponse: Dear Philippe/Correction de hoger, postée le 21-09-2008 à 20:37:03 (S | E)
Generally, a good job!
Some remarks:
Dear Philippe,
Thanks for writing me back!
Réponse: Dear Philippe/Correction de doggie, postée le 21-09-2008 à 20:51:51 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour la correction
A bientôt
Doggie