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Message de deutscher posté le 04-11-2008 à 12:21:56 (S | E | F)
Hi everyone!
Nous avons un devoir d'anglais à rendre pour jeudi (
déjà la rentrée), et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai des fautes (ce qui est le cas j'en suis sûr).
Le sujet,le voici: on doit parler d'un membre de notre famille (en l'occurrence ma tante), en précisant les informations banales: âge, nom, animaux, métier, capacités (can) ...
Donc voici le chef-d'oeuvre(
):
I'm the apple of my aunt's eye and I really like her too. She trust me and so do I. Her name's Lydia and she's over thirty-six or maybe thirty-seven, I don't remember it exactly. She lives in Limoges with her husband. She hasn't got any pets. She loves painting, drawing, sculpting, carving and every other artistical activities.
About art, she can paint very well, I can't (ask it for my draw teacher). Her husband, my uncle, can play the football quiet well and the basketball very well, like me. Personally, I can run very well, and above all fast!I can jump the hurdle very well too, like my aunt could once.
She's a firefighter and she's very sporty. She isn't afraid of flames. She needs a lot self-control. Her job sometimes gets she tired, or should I say often. She mustn't speak about it at home: she's held by the professional secret. She's to get up in the early morning at workdays.
Et ben voilou, merci d'avance de votre aide
Message de deutscher posté le 04-11-2008 à 12:21:56 (S | E | F)
Hi everyone!
Nous avons un devoir d'anglais à rendre pour jeudi (
déjà la rentrée), et j'aimerais savoir si j'ai des fautes (ce qui est le cas j'en suis sûr).Le sujet,le voici: on doit parler d'un membre de notre famille (en l'occurrence ma tante), en précisant les informations banales: âge, nom, animaux, métier, capacités (can
) ...Donc voici le chef-d'oeuvre(
):I'm the apple of my aunt's eye and I really like her too. She trust me and so do I. Her name's Lydia and she's over thirty-six or maybe thirty-seven, I don't remember it exactly. She lives in Limoges with her husband. She hasn't got any pets. She loves painting, drawing, sculpting, carving and every other artistical activities.
About art, she can paint very well, I can't (ask it for my draw teacher). Her husband, my uncle, can play the football quiet well and the basketball very well, like me. Personally, I can run very well, and above all fast!I can jump the hurdle very well too, like my aunt could once.
She's a firefighter and she's very sporty. She isn't afraid of flames. She needs a lot self-control. Her job sometimes gets she tired, or should I say often. She mustn't speak about it at home: she's held by the professional secret. She's to get up in the early morning at workdays.
Et ben voilou, merci d'avance de votre aide
Réponse: Devoir 3ème LV2 de deutscher, postée le 05-11-2008 à 10:29:21 (S | E)
Please, it can't wait!
Réponse: Devoir 3ème LV2 de ramorc, postée le 05-11-2008 à 12:39:10 (S | E)
Hello deutscher
Voila ta réponse
- I don't remember it exactly : it n'est pas necessaire
- carving and every other artistical activities : other prend un s
- she can paint very well : can prend un s
- can play the football : can prend un s
- She isn't afraid of flames : dit plutot fire a la place de flame
- She's to get up in the early morning at workdays :mets plutôt she always get up ...
J'espere t'avoir aidé
CORDIALEMENT ramorc
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-11-2008 14:07
Merci de ne pas corriger si vous n'êtes pas compétent,ce qui est le cas ici.
Réponse: Devoir 3ème LV2 de azer3, postée le 05-11-2008 à 13:45:06 (S | E)
Bon jour
I'm the apple of my aunt's eyes and I really like her too. She trust me and so I does. Her name is Lydia and she's over thirty-six or maybe thirty-seven, I can't remember it exactly. She lives in Limoges with her husband. She hasn't got any pets. She loves painting, drawing, sculpting, carving and every other artistical activities.
for art, she can paint very well, I can't (ask it for my draw teacher). Her husband, my uncle, can play football quiet well but he plays basketball very well, like me. Personally, I can run very well, and above all fast!I can jump the hurdle very well too, like my aunt could once .
She's a firefighter and she's very sporty. She isn't afraid of flames. She needs a lot of self-control. Her job sometimes gets her tired, or I should say often. She mustn't speak about it at home: she's held by the professional secret. She has to get up in the early morning at workdays.
Cordialement.
Réponse: Devoir 3ème LV2 de intrepid34, postée le 05-11-2008 à 13:58:31 (S | E)
Good afternoon deutscher !
Your work is quite good. I'm sorry to tell you that Ramorc's corrections weren't quite correct (can ne prend jamais un "s" ainsi que les adjectifs)
Line 1: 1° pers du sing: = do So do I!
Line 1 she is 36 years old or maybe thirty seven.
Line 2: I don't remember exactly.
Line 3: and other crafts.
Line 4: With regards to art/As for art she can paint very well whereas I can't! (Ask my Art Teacher!)
Line 4: Quite well (faute de frappe?)
Line 5: Makes her tired
Line 6: On workdays (Comme "on Monday, on Tuesday ....)
Il y a d'autres toutes petites choses mais dans l'ensemble tu as fait un très bon travail.
Good luck
Intrepid
Réponse: Devoir 3ème LV2 de deutscher, postée le 05-11-2008 à 17:58:39 (S | E)
Thank you to azer3 et à intrépide34, vous me sauvez la vie! ;)
PS:quite well= oui faute de frappe
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Modifié par deutscher le 05-11-2008 18:07
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-11-2008 15:27
Appréciation sur un autre membre effacée; merci de rester courtois.
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