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Message de recovery posté le 05-02-2009 à 17:44:03 (S | E | F)
Hello tous le monde !
Voila, j'ai décidé de vous montrer mon paragraphe pour demain !
I came to Vietnam from 2006.
When I arrived in the UK, my life was very difficult.
In 2006,my father was died in Vietnam as he was very sick.
With my mother, we left for England, in London.
My best Vietnam friends and my "cam sang" ( = riz matin den vietnamien)misses me.
The weather changed too. Although in Vietnam, the weather is very good, in England, he is bad ! It rai,s all times !
Many English people don't understand me. I have a strong accent !
The life is not the same one, in England, there are no war ... but English people is very stressed by the work compared to people Vietnamese .
Although England isn't my native country, I love him and now, I have new friends and a England stepfather.
With my new dad, I learned to play baseball and cricket !
I love it and ( je ne sais pas quoi mettre à la fin !)
Merci de m'aider, et de m'aider à l'améliorer !
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Modifié par bridg le 05-02-2009 18:12
Message de recovery posté le 05-02-2009 à 17:44:03 (S | E | F)
Hello tous le monde !
Voila, j'ai décidé de vous montrer mon paragraphe pour demain !
I came to Vietnam from 2006.
When I arrived in the UK, my life was very difficult.
In 2006,my father was died in Vietnam as he was very sick.
With my mother, we left for England, in London.
My best Vietnam friends and my "cam sang" ( = riz matin den vietnamien)misses me.
The weather changed too. Although in Vietnam, the weather is very good, in England, he is bad ! It rai,s all times !
Many English people don't understand me. I have a strong accent !
The life is not the same one, in England, there are no war ... but English people is very stressed by the work compared to people Vietnamese .
Although England isn't my native country, I love him and now, I have new friends and a England stepfather.
With my new dad, I learned to play baseball and cricket !
I love it and ( je ne sais pas quoi mettre à la fin !)
Merci de m'aider, et de m'aider à l'améliorer !
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Modifié par bridg le 05-02-2009 18:12
Réponse: New life de linsey34, postée le 06-02-2009 à 09:18:14 (S | E)
Dear recovery,
en rouge les erreurs à corriger:
I came to Vietnam from 2006.
When I arrived in the UK, my life was very difficult.
In 2006,my father
With my mother, we left for England, in London.
My best Vietnam friends and my "cam sang" ( = riz matin den vietnamien)misses me.
The weather changed too. Although in Vietnam, the weather is very good, in England, he is bad ! It rai,s all times !
Many English people don't understand me. I have a strong accent !
The life is not the same one, in England, there are no war ... but English people is very stressed by
Although England isn't my native country, I love him and now, I have new friends and a England stepfather.
With my new dad, I learned how to play baseball and cricket !
I love it and ( je ne sais pas quoi mettre à la fin !)
INDISPENSABLES : 