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DM/Cambridge to Edinburgh
Message de flexmat posté le 17-02-2009 à 18:01:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un dm d'anglais à rédiger,cependant le sujet ne m'as pas inspiré et je reste persuadé que ma rédaction est nulle.Si quelqu'un pouvait me donner un avis.Je vous remercie d'avance.
Dear Peter and John,
Thanks for your last letter.Sorry, I haven't written you for a long time because
I had some difficulties to find the information about the price of the round-trip tickets of trains.
The crossing between Cambridge to Edinburgh takes around 8 hrs by car, 11 hrs by coach and only 5 hrs by train.
The best way of travelling to Edinburgh is to take train.Indeed,it's more comfortable than coach and quicker.But the
price is dearer $90 by train and $60 by coach(only on Friday and Saturday).To solve this problem,we can go on trip
on Monday because it permit to reduce the price:it's only $75!To be not tired we can leave at 07.56 am of Cambridge.
Well,that's all for now.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-02-2009 18:08
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Message de flexmat posté le 17-02-2009 à 18:01:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un dm d'anglais à rédiger,cependant le sujet ne m'as pas inspiré et je reste persuadé que ma rédaction est nulle.Si quelqu'un pouvait me donner un avis.Je vous remercie d'avance.
Dear Peter and John,
Thanks for your last letter.Sorry, I haven't written you for a long time because
I had some difficulties to find the information about the price of the round-trip tickets of trains.
The crossing between Cambridge to Edinburgh takes around 8 hrs by car, 11 hrs by coach and only 5 hrs by train.
The best way of travelling to Edinburgh is to take train.Indeed,it's more comfortable than coach and quicker.But the
price is dearer $90 by train and $60 by coach(only on Friday and Saturday).To solve this problem,we can go on trip
on Monday because it permit to reduce the price:it's only $75!To be not tired we can leave at 07.56 am of Cambridge.
Well,that's all for now.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-02-2009 18:08
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Réponse: DM/Cambridge to Edinburgh de linsey34, postée le 18-02-2009 à 07:52:46 (S | E)
Dear flexmat,
en rouge les erreurs à corriger:
Dear Peter and John,
Thanks for your last letter.Sorry, I haven't written you for a long time because
I had some difficulties to find the information about the price of the round-trip tickets of trains.
The crossing between Cambridge to Edinburgh takes around 8 hrs by car, 11 hrs by coach and only 5 hrs by train.
The best way of travelling to Edinburgh is to take train.Indeed,it's more comfortable than coach and quicker.But the
price is dearer $90 by train and $60 by coach(only on Friday and Saturday).To solve this problem,we can go on trip
on Monday because it permit to reduce the price:it's only $75!To be not tired we can leave at 07.56 am of Cambridge.
Well,that's all for now.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
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