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    Message de liylie posté le 18-05-2009 à 19:20:09 (S | E | F)

    Hello!
    J'ai un oral à faire et je voudrais que vous m'apportiez votre aide pour corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait! Car je ne suis vraiment pas doué en anglais et je voudrais réussir cet oral car il comptera dans ma moyenne. J’espère que vous pourrez m'apporter votre aide.
    merci


    Today, I am going to talk to you about a series that I appreciate enormously and that is hit a colloquial at States and whose is begun à hear about in France, The Big Bang Theory.

    It tells the life of 4 geeks Leonard, Sheldon, Raj and Howard that live in collocation and who spend their time between Halo, the seasons of Battlestar Galactica, and speak about theoretical physics their favorite talking point. However Their universe huum is perturbed when an attractive young lady, Penny, locates in the apartment opposite and comes become their professor of life.
    These are the characters that make all the charm of the series with for example Leonard. he directly falls in love Penny and dreams have childrens with her " beautiful and clever" but his friend him says above all "fanciful".
    Sheldon is the best friend's Leonard. It's the cleverest of the group. He has mental disturbance, for example, overnight he comes order Penny’s apartment whereas she sleeps because he doesn’t abide the souk.
    Howard always lives at his mother place, speaks about 6 tongues usually: English, French, mandarin, Russian, Arabic and Persian. He is obsessed by the women and the sex. Very optimistic, he thinks of being an excellent seducer.
    Finally, Raj best friend’s Howard. He is considered by the women as attentive because it is incapable to speak to the women or close to women. He speaks them but the alcohol abuse is indispensable. Howard and him like making some blow below the belt in sheldon and leonard (as the sending of weak videos on youtube)
    Lastly, POUR CEUX A QUI CA interest, we can see the series in internet but in VO because it's more fun or on the TV channel of France.

    Voila mon oral,j'espère que vous pourrez me corriger car j'ai du faire beaucoup d'erreurs je pense.
    merci - à très bientôt.
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    Modifié par bridg le 18-05-2009 19:26


    Réponse: series /Correction de laure95, postée le 19-05-2009 à 10:39:37 (S | E)
    Bonjour, voici ce que tu dois corriger:
    Today, I am going to talk to you about a series that I appreciate enormously and that is a hit a colloquial ? at (in the) States and whose (which) is begun à hear about in France, The Big Bang Theory.

    It tells the life of 4 geeks (Greeks?) Leonard, Sheldon, Raj and Howard that live in collocation and who spend their time between Halo, the seasons of ?Battlestar Galactica, and speak about theoretical physics their favorite talking point. However Their universe huum is perturbed when an attractive young lady, Penny, locates (gérondif) in the apartment opposite (mal placé) and comes has become their professor of life.
    These are the characters that make all the charm of the series with for example Leonard. he directly falls in love with Penny and dreams to have childrens with her. She is" beautiful and clever" but his friend him (mal placé) says above all "fanciful".
    Sheldon is the best friend's Leonard (revois la construction du génitif). It's the cleverest of the group. He has mental disturbance, for example, overnight he comes order Penny’s apartment whereas she sleeps because he doesn’t abide the souk.
    Howard always lives at his mother place ?, speaks about 6 tongues usually: English, French, mandarin, Russian, Arabic and Persian. He is obsessed by the women and the sex. Very optimistic, he thinks of being an excellent seducer.
    Finally, Raj best friend’s Howard. He is considered by the women as attentive because it is incapable to speak (of speaking) to the women or being close to women. He speaks to them but the alcohol abuse is indispensable. Howard and him like making some blow below the belt in sheldon and leonard (as the sending of weak videos on youtube)
    Lastly, POUR CEUX A QUI CA interest (for those who could be interested in it), we can see the series in (on) internet but in VO because it's more fun (revois le comparatif des adjectifs courts) or on the TV channels of France.




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