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Message de cogaline posté le 09-06-2009 à 15:33:49 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je passe l'oral de Bts demain. Je voudrais savoir si ma présentation est bonne.
My name is Coraline, but my friends call me Coco. I live in Aix Noulette. I was born on 4th September 1989 (nineteen eighty nine) in Arras so I have nineteen years old. I have got one sister who called Ludivine. She is commercial. My mum is an accountant and my dad is director of a haulage company. I like watching TV, going to the cinema or still reading. Later, I would like to work in a bank.
Merci,
Coraline
Message de cogaline posté le 09-06-2009 à 15:33:49 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je passe l'oral de Bts demain. Je voudrais savoir si ma présentation est bonne.
My name is Coraline, but my friends call me Coco. I live in Aix Noulette. I was born on 4th September 1989 (nineteen eighty nine) in Arras so I have nineteen years old. I have got one sister who called Ludivine. She is commercial. My mum is an accountant and my dad is director of a haulage company. I like watching TV, going to the cinema or still reading. Later, I would like to work in a bank.
Merci,
Coraline
Réponse: Présentation en Anglais de lucile83, postée le 09-06-2009 à 15:44:14 (S | E)
Hello,
Your mistakes are in red,
My name is Coraline, but my friends call me Coco. I live in Aix Noulette. I was born on 4th September 1989 (nineteen eighty nine) in Arras so I have nineteen years old. I have got one sister who... called Ludivine. She is ... commercial. My mum is an accountant and my dad is .... director of a haulage company. I like watching TV, going to the cinema or still reading. Later, I would like to work in a bank.
- commercial is an adjective,you must add a noun
- Later, you should say: later on/in a few years/in some years etc...
Best wishes.
Réponse: Présentation en Anglais de cogaline, postée le 09-06-2009 à 15:51:13 (S | E)
Merci de m'aider, c'est super sympa. Comme tu peux le constater, je ne suis pas super bonne en anglais. J'ai essayé de corriger....
My name is Coraline, but my friends call me Coco. I live in Aix Noulette. I was born on 4th September 1989 (nineteen eighty nine) in Arras so I have nineteen years old. I have got one sister who is called Ludivine. She is commercial in decoration . My mum is an accountant and my dad is the director of a haulage company. I like watching TV, going to the cinema or reading. In a few years, I would like to work in a bank.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-06-2009 15:58
Réponse: Présentation en Anglais de lucile83, postée le 09-06-2009 à 15:57:11 (S | E)
Hello,
My name is Coraline, but my friends call me Coco. I live in Aix Noulette. I was born on 4th September 1989 (nineteen eighty nine) in Arras so I have nineteen years old. I have got one sister who is called Ludivine. She is commercial agent in decoration . My mum is an accountant and my dad is the director of a haulage company. I like watching TV, going to the cinema or reading. In a few years, I would like to work in a bank.
Correct 'I have 19' !!! it's just nonsense in English.
Good work !
Réponse: Présentation en Anglais de cogaline, postée le 09-06-2009 à 15:59:04 (S | E)
Merci Merci Beaucoup!
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