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Message de mariee posté le 01-11-2009 à 15:55:37 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, j'ai une rédaction à faire en anglais (100 mots). Je voulais savoir si celle-ci était bien

Le sujet est: What sort of pressure di you have to face ? (Who? What?) Explain and give precise examples. How do you feel?

Voici ma rédaction :
I have to face many sorts of pressure.
First, my parents for example.
They want I begin the best and I make a success of my studies.
I would like to become a teacher but they want that I become a doctor.
Second: my coach.
He wishes that I am an example for the other people in Judo club and that I win quite my matches.
Third: my sisters.
They want to know everything about my friendly and sentimental life.
It is unbearable!
Finally: the society.
Nowadays, it is necessary to be dressed well, to have the last fashionable objects, the new marks (brands ?) of garment,
the last mobile...
But I am not a sheep, I would like to choose my lifestyle, the clothes which I would like to wear,
my future profession..
I feel angry because people does not understand that I need credit note of the intimacy, small secrets...
I reproach There for being impolite and nosy!
Fortunately whom the friends are there.

Merci d'avance

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