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Message de croc posté le 16-02-2011 à 23:28:51
Bonjour, bonjour !
J'aurais besoin de votre aide d'expert pour m'aider à corriger les imperfections de ce texte:
Merci d'avance pour votre temps !
Lot of applicant for immigration dreams to Europe. Many are those who try to leave the poverty, the war, the famine so that they will find a better future.
In 2009 near 41 million immigrants lived in the European Union. The immigrant population represented 8,6 % of the European population. The immigrant reception has became the main engine of the population growth in Europe. Without them 25 of 27 European countries will lose residents every year.
In the past Spain and Italy was emigrating [/out-migrating ?] are now becoming the main countries of immigration in Europe. Only the Baltic States and the Poland have always negative migratory balance.
The immigration is incontestably a important factor for the economy health mainly in Europe because it allow to supply a labor force economical and plentiful in order to favor the economic growth.
However, Europe tries to fight against the illegal immigration. Recently the government of Greece has suggest to protect the European space of the immigrants by a wall in a strategic place.
Indeed the border between the Turkey and Greece is the open door for 90% illegal immigrant in European Union, mainly arriving from Africa and Afghan. We count more than 1000 immigrants there who cross the border to go to live in Europe every day. That’s why the Greece wants to close this open door by a wall.
It will be the copy of the American wall on the border of Mexico or the one built in Cisjordania by Israel.
It will be composed by a 3 meters high and will extend over 12 kilometers , strengthened by barbed wires and cameras. It is announced as unbridgeable.
So, the entire border between Greece and Turkey will be watched.
Say that this wall would be the first one in Europe is false. There are already in Europe twice wall of the same type, built to Melilla and Ceula, between Spain and Morocco.
The construction of such walls is a heresy in Europe. We need the immigration to maintaining our economic power
Furthermore when at the end of 1989s the Berlin Wall fell, All Europe had meant to rebuild no never of wall which éparerait the peoples. 21 years later, we still build it.[=De plus lorsqu’à la fin des années 1989 le mur de Berlin est tombé, l’Europe entière s’était promise de ne plus jamais rebâtir de mur qui s’éparerait les peuples, 21 ans après, nous en construisons encore.]
Modifié par lucile83 le 17-02-2011 07:02
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Réponse: The immigration in Europe [correction] de notrepere, postée le 17-02-2011 à 05:00:24
Il me semble que votre texte a été créé par un traducteur en ligne. You don't post any follow-up corrections to our corrections either. How do we know you are learning anything and not just taking our work for your own personal gain? I'd like to help, but I don't want to waste my time.
Réponse: The immigration in Europe [correction] de lucile83, postée le 17-02-2011 à 07:02:06
Voici la fin de votre texte selon reverso:
De plus lorsqu’à la fin des années 1989 le mur de Berlin est tombé, l’Europe entière s’était promise de ne plus jamais rebâtir de mur qui s’éparerait les peuples, 21 ans après, nous en construisons encore.
Furthermore when at the end of 1989s the Berlin Wall fell, whole Europe had meant to rebuild no never of wall which éparerait the peoples, age 21 later, we still build it.
Comme il est dit dans le message précédent nous ne corrigeons pas une machine.