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Message de toxictears18 posté le 22-03-2011 à 02:27:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour.

j'aimerais avoir un avis sur cette lettre et savoir s'il y a des fautes ou pas ,merci . Du moins j'espère que non.

"AS we were talking last time about probables appointments we could have once a week"
Anyway, I think it would be a better idea for you than arriving late and ruining /wasting your break.
So could you spare me a few minutes,around 10 minutes a week,that would be great.I 'd be really grateful for that.

I 'm so willing to learn as you may already know,
and I do think even 10 minutes, would bring me a lot.

Would you please let me know your answer.

I'm looking forward to hear from you.

With regards

...x

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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-03-2011 07:53

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Réponse: Lettre /avis de may, postée le 22-03-2011 à 02:50:04 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

Very good I think


"AS we were talking last time about probables appointments we could have once a week" (pourquoi vous la mettez dans les guillemets, si non on peut la lier avec la phrase suivante et on peut suppremer l'adverbe Anyway
Anyway, I think it would be a better idea for you than arriving late and ruining /wasting your break.
So could you spare me a few minutes,espace around 10 minutes a week,espace that would be great.I 'd (no space) be really grateful for that.

I 'm so willing to learn as you may already know,
and I do think even 10 minutes, would bring me a lot...(of help)

Would you please let me know your answer.

I'm looking forward to hear(ing form) from you.

With regards

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