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Lettre /Lady Gaga
Message de converse57 posté le 29-04-2011 à 14:04:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis un grand fan de Lady Gaga et j'ai pour devoir de lui écrire une lettre;
si quelqu'un pouvait me dire si je n'ai pas fait de faute ce serait sympathique car je voudrais lui envoyer.
Merci à vous; voici ce que j'ai écrit :
Hello lady gaga I'm a frensh little monster ,my name is Quentin .
You are my Favorite singers ,you are beautiful and very creative
Do not listen the people which criticizes you are of simple jealous person, kept silent is the best rank with the head up .You are strong and you are Born This Way
I read Everything magazine which I find on you in English, fresh, German
I listen your music every day ,when i am sad ,i listen the fame and the fame monster and i'm Happier .I shall dream about you met
I shall have wanted to know if I could have an autograph of you
My adresse is :------------------------
I wish you to sing and create again album all your lifeI love you
Big kisses,You are Amazing
PUT YOUR PAWS UP
I love you
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-04-2011 18:56
Message de converse57 posté le 29-04-2011 à 14:04:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je suis un grand fan de Lady Gaga et j'ai pour devoir de lui écrire une lettre;
si quelqu'un pouvait me dire si je n'ai pas fait de faute ce serait sympathique car je voudrais lui envoyer.
Merci à vous; voici ce que j'ai écrit :
Hello lady gaga I'm a frensh little monster ,my name is Quentin .
You are my Favorite singers ,you are beautiful and very creative
Do not listen the people which criticizes you are of simple jealous person, kept silent is the best rank with the head up .You are strong and you are Born This Way
I read Everything magazine which I find on you in English, fresh, German
I listen your music every day ,when i am sad ,i listen the fame and the fame monster and i'm Happier .I shall dream about you met
I shall have wanted to know if I could have an autograph of you
My adresse is :------------------------
I wish you to sing and create again album all your lifeI love you
Big kisses,You are Amazing
PUT YOUR PAWS UP
I love you
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-04-2011 18:56
Réponse: Lettre /Lady Gaga de may, postée le 30-04-2011 à 02:46:55 (S | E)
Bonsoir
Hello lady gaga I'm a frensh little/vient après article monster ,ponctuation my name is Quentin .
You are my Favorite singers (ou one of my favourite singers) ,you are beautiful and very creative
Do not listen....prép the people which/autre pronom criticizes/present perfect you
I read Everything/pas de bon mot magazine which I find
I listen.... your music every day ,when i am sad,i listen.... the fame and the fame monster and i'm Happier .I shall dream about you met/Rephrase
I shall have wanted to know if I could have an autograph of you
My adresse is :------------------------
I wish you to sing and create/make
Big kisses,You are Amazing
PUT YOUR PAWS UP
I love you
Green OK
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Modifié par may le 30-04-2011 02:48
Bug couleur, dear Lucile
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-04-2011 07:06
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