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Message de luks posté le 20-09-2011 à 20:46:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'aurais besoin de votre aide pour m'aider à corriger les phrases suivantes (où j'ai un doute):
"We are going to go into detail of some topics which have made the headlines of the year".
"This isolated phenomenon turned into a riot which allowed the populations from the minorities to voice their malaise in the current British society"
"Moreover, in a longer view, this downgrade could discredit the American president Obama in sight of the 2012 elections."
Merci d'avance !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-09-2011 22:22
Message de luks posté le 20-09-2011 à 20:46:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'aurais besoin de votre aide pour m'aider à corriger les phrases suivantes (où j'ai un doute):
"We are going to go into detail of some topics which have made the headlines of the year".
"This isolated phenomenon turned into a riot which allowed the populations from the minorities to voice their malaise in the current British society"
"Moreover, in a longer view, this downgrade could discredit the American president Obama in sight of the 2012 elections."
Merci d'avance !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 20-09-2011 22:22
Réponse: Correction/ phrases de notrepere, postée le 20-09-2011 à 22:13:05 (S | E)
Bonjour"We are going to go into detail of (about/on) some topics which have made the headlines
"This isolated phenomenon turned into a riot which allowed the populations from the minorities (3) to voice their malaise in (with?) the current British society"
"Moreover, in a longer view (1), this downgrade could discredit the American president Obama (2) in sight of the 2012 elections."
(1) voulez-vous dire "in the long run/term"? Lien Internet
(2) Il ne se dit pas de cette façon. On peut dire: discredit Obama, the American President OU discredit American President Obama (sans 'the')
(3) Le sens n'est pas clair
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Modifié par notrepere le 20-09-2011 22:13
Réponse: Correction/ phrases de dvn44, postée le 20-09-2011 à 22:20:20 (S | E)
Hello,
Concernant les 2 premières phrases, je les formulerais comme ceci :
We are going to elaborate on some topics which hit the headlines this year.
This isolated phenomenon turned into a riot which allowed the minorities to voice their trouble in today's British society.
Rien à dire concernant la dernière phrase.
Bon courage.
Réponse: Correction/ phrases de luks, postée le 21-09-2011 à 14:53:59 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Merci beaucoup pour vos réponses, je vais rectifier tout ça.
Bonne journée !
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