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Correction/film by Spielberg
Message de amande224 posté le 21-01-2012 à 10:23:22 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai une expression écrite de 120 mots à faire et le sujet est : Is there a filmwas that particularly impressed you ? Relate and say why.
Et j'aurais besoin que vous m'aidiez à corriger les fautes d’orthographe de mon expression écrite s'il vous plait.
Voici le texte :
I was particulary impressed by Super 8 a Steven Spielberg's film which was produced in 2011. It's a fantastic film. Indeed it's the story of children who live in a small city, they made a film's name is Super 8. One day while the children play in the country : there is a train accident then crazy things take place in the village. At the end children find that a monster lives in the city and it would become back home in an other planet. Finally, as for me, the film is a nice film indeed there are wonderful special effects. Even if this film is fantastic, it represents nevertheless a small part of real life since the story : there are a love story with two children and problems with two fathers. From my point of view this film was a whole new experience for me because usually I don't like fantastic films.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-01-2012 10:47
Message de amande224 posté le 21-01-2012 à 10:23:22 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai une expression écrite de 120 mots à faire et le sujet est : Is there a film
Et j'aurais besoin que vous m'aidiez à corriger les fautes d’orthographe de mon expression écrite s'il vous plait.
Voici le texte :
I was particulary impressed by Super 8 a Steven Spielberg's film which was produced in 2011. It's a fantastic film. Indeed it's the story of children who live in a small city, they made a film's name is Super 8. One day while the children play in the country : there is a train accident then crazy things take place in the village. At the end children find that a monster lives in the city and it would become back home in an other planet. Finally, as for me, the film is a nice film indeed there are wonderful special effects. Even if this film is fantastic, it represents nevertheless a small part of real life since the story : there are a love story with two children and problems with two fathers. From my point of view this film was a whole new experience for me because usually I don't like fantastic films.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-01-2012 10:47
Réponse: Correction/film by Spielberg de lucile83, postée le 22-01-2012 à 18:32:03 (S | E)
anybody? Thanks...Réponse: Correction/film by Spielberg de sherry48, postée le 22-01-2012 à 19:05:51 (S | E)
Hello amande224.
You can start with these areas.
I was particulary impressed by Super 8, a Steven Spielberg's film (which was) produced in 2011. It's a fantastic film. Indeed it's the story of children who live in a small city, they made a film's name is Super 8. One day while the children play in the country : there is a train accident(Stop)then crazy things take place in the village. At the end * children find that a monster lives in the city and it would become back home in an other planet. Finally, as for me, the film is a nice film (punctuation?)indeed there are wonderful special effects. Even if this film is fantastic, it represents nevertheless a small part of real life (punctuation?) since the story : there are a love story with two children and problems with two fathers. From my point of view this film was a whole new experience for me because usually I don't like fantastic films.
Have a nice evening. Sherry
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