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Vérification liens/correction
Message de bernard02 posté le 22-04-2013 à 00:33:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à toutes et à tous,

pouvez-vous me dire, s'il vous plaît, si mes exercices suivants sont corrects ou s'il y a des modifications ou des améliorations à apporter?
Cordialement et merci d'avance.

Exercises for Monday, 22nd April 2013.

- Look at the endings to the emails in exercise B and match them to the correct beginnings in exercise A.

Exercise A:

1
Just a quick message to say I'm working at home this afternoon. Tan Keung Yam is manning the office.
2
Hi all,
FYI today is 'National Leave-The-Office-Early Day'.
3
Hi Terri,
Re your visit next week, can you send me your flight details ASAP so I can organize transport from the airport?
4
Terri,
I just got your voice message. I'm attaching the answers to some FAQs about uploading files to the website.
5
Dear Terri,
I'm writing to confirm that we're expecting to ship your order for European plug adaptors Ref. No. 437281 on Friday. We're just waiting for one part to arrive.
6
Dear Ms Mahler,
Thank you for your enquiry. Yes, we have a room available for the 30th. The rate is $150 per night and we will require your credit card details to make a reservation.

Exercise B:

a
We're looking forward to seeing you on the 15th.
Thanks a lot and have a safe trip,
Jan Svensson.
b
If you need to speak with me, feel free to call me here on 215 555 9436,
Cheers,
Elly
c
See question 4 – I think it will solve your problem.
I hope this helps,
Aleksy
d
We apologize for the delay and thank you for your patience.
Best wishes,
Enid
e
If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to ask.
Kind regards,
Emily Dickson
f
Why are you still here reading this ?
Agostina
P.S. Have a great weekend !

My answers :

1/b :
Just a quick message to say I'm working at home this afternoon. Tan Keung Yam is manning the office. -> If you need to speak with me, feel free to call me here on 215 555 9436,
Cheers,
Elly

2/f:
Hi all,
FYI today is 'National Leave-The-Office-Early Day'. -> Why are you still here reading this ?
Agostina
P.S. Have a great weekend !

3/a :
Hi Terri,
Re your visit next week, can you send me your flight details ASAP so I can organize transport from the airport? -> We're looking forward to seeing you on the 15th.
Thanks a lot and have a safe trip,
Jan Svensson.

4/c:
Terri,
I just got your voice message. I'm attaching the answers to some FAQs about uploading files to the website. -> See question 4 – I think it will solve your problem.
I hope this helps,
Aleksy

5/d:
Dear Terri,
I'm writing to confirm that we're expecting to ship your order for European plug adaptors Ref. No. 437281 on Friday. We're just waiting for one part to arrive. -> We apologize for the delay and thank you for your patience.
Best wishes,
Enid

6/e:
Dear Ms Mahler,
Thank you for your enquiry. Yes, we have a room available for the 30th. The rate is $150 per night and we will require your credit card details to make a reservation. -> If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate to ask.
Kind regards,
Emily Dickson


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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-04-2013 07:47

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Réponse: Vérification liens/correction de bernard02, postée le 22-04-2013 à 17:17:35 (S | E)
Bonjour,

je dois rendre ces exercices dans une heure ! Quelqu'un peut-il me répondre rapidement ?

Merci d'avance.

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Réponse: Vérification liens/correction de willy, postée le 22-04-2013 à 17:34:09 (S | E)
Hello!

Looks OK to me!

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Réponse: Vérification liens/correction de bernard02, postée le 22-04-2013 à 17:47:53 (S | E)
OK, thank you very much !It's time to go now.

Kinds regards.

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Réponse: Vérification liens/correction de bernard02, postée le 23-04-2013 à 01:30:18 (S | E)
Bonsoir (ou bonjour)

ces exercices ont été corrigés hier soir (lundi), aucune faute à signaler.

quand même.

Cordialement.

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