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Message de gessi55 posté le 25-09-2013 à 19:33:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
j'aimerais avoir vos corrections sur ce sujet : raconter comment l'on se voit(c'est assez urgent ) :
Hello, my name is Asma and I am going to say to you how I see myself. First of all I think of beings a very jealous girl, it is my first defect, when it comes to friends or of love I can very fast become enraged. I wanted to warn(prevent) you that I laugh for nothing, sometimes in class an eleve says a stupidity(stupid thing) or other thing I can laugh at it for hours thus I already apologize if that arrives in your class. Then I have the blood hot as I said it before I become enraged and get excited very quickly. Then in spite of all my defects (I did not quote everything) I have some qualities, I think of beings a serious girl at the level of the work and a kind person(a gentile). Here is how I see myself!
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-09-2013 21:37
Message de gessi55 posté le 25-09-2013 à 19:33:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
j'aimerais avoir vos corrections sur ce sujet : raconter comment l'on se voit
Hello, my name is Asma and I am going to say to you how I see myself. First of all I think of beings a very jealous girl, it is my first defect, when it comes to friends or of love I can very fast become enraged. I wanted to warn(prevent) you that I laugh for nothing, sometimes in class an eleve says a stupidity(stupid thing) or other thing I can laugh at it for hours thus I already apologize if that arrives in your class. Then I have the blood hot as I said it before I become enraged and get excited very quickly. Then in spite of all my defects (I did not quote everything) I have some qualities, I think of beings a serious girl at the level of the work and a kind person(a gentile). Here is how I see myself!
Merci pour vos réponses.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-09-2013 21:37
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