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Message de digorie posté le 18-01-2014 à 18:52:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Auriez-vous la gentillesse de corriger cette rédaction qui est un résumé d'une histoire inventée par moi-même ?
A boat that contrains a cargo of gold through the Atlantic Ocean. Some dishonest people want to take possession of the gold to produce alcohol. They want to kill all the crew and go away with the boat. A detective woman and man want to prevent .they investigated and traced the nasty men. It's a group of men who produce alcohol but they have more money. They are know by the autorities. The two detectives have arrested their but the woman use her power of seduction to go away with all the gold and with the boat.
Merci beaucoup et bonne journée !!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-01-2014 21:46
Message de digorie posté le 18-01-2014 à 18:52:35 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Auriez-vous la gentillesse de corriger cette rédaction qui est un résumé d'une histoire inventée par moi-même ?
A boat that contrains a cargo of gold through the Atlantic Ocean. Some dishonest people want to take possession of the gold to produce alcohol. They want to kill all the crew and go away with the boat. A detective woman and man want to prevent .they investigated and traced the nasty men. It's a group of men who produce alcohol but they have more money. They are know by the autorities. The two detectives have arrested their but the woman use her power of seduction to go away with all the gold and with the boat.
Merci beaucoup et bonne journée !!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-01-2014 21:46
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