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Message de jawa posté le 17-04-2014 à 19:03:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un oral à préparer et j'aimerais que vous m'aidiez à éviter de faire trop de fautes. Plus particulièrement la deuxième partie de mon travail, s'il vous plaît .
Merci pour vos réponses.
Secondly Internet and website can attack your private life. The new technologies are forms of power because the government used the new technologies to spying the people and their private life. First of all the congress of United States voted the patriot act. It increases the government's surveillance powers to fight terrorism. Allows the government to have access to records of citizen's activity, databases of doctors universities bookstores, and Internet service providers. Personally I think that The patriot act Increases the government's power to search private property without warrant. For example, an article of the guardian which talking about Edward Snowden, the whistleblowe. He working for the national Security Agency, this agency is the biggest spy surveillance organization in the world. However he revealed that millions of Americans citizens were surveilled by their government through their telephone, e-mails and social network. For example, the US government has been accused of forcing telecoms giant, Verizon to hand over the phone records of millions of American to the program prism. Edward Snowden is now America's most wanted person and he is in Russia. These revelation revelations show that we do not have private life anymore. Government wants to know all that made him. Them powers does not have limit anymore thanks to the new technologies.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-04-2014 21:22
Message de jawa posté le 17-04-2014 à 19:03:29 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai un oral à préparer et j'aimerais que vous m'aidiez à éviter de faire trop de fautes. Plus particulièrement la deuxième partie de mon travail, s'il vous plaît .
Merci pour vos réponses.
Secondly Internet and website can attack your private life. The new technologies are forms of power because the government used the new technologies to spying the people and their private life. First of all the congress of United States voted the patriot act. It increases the government's surveillance powers to fight terrorism. Allows the government to have access to records of citizen's activity, databases of doctors universities bookstores, and Internet service providers. Personally I think that The patriot act Increases the government's power to search private property without warrant. For example, an article of the guardian which talking about Edward Snowden, the whistleblowe. He working for the national Security Agency, this agency is the biggest spy surveillance organization in the world. However he revealed that millions of Americans citizens were surveilled by their government through their telephone, e-mails and social network. For example, the US government has been accused of forcing telecoms giant, Verizon to hand over the phone records of millions of American to the program prism. Edward Snowden is now America's most wanted person and he is in Russia. These revelation revelations show that we do not have private life anymore. Government wants to know all that made him. Them powers does not have limit anymore thanks to the new technologies.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-04-2014 21:22
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