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Message de paris1357 posté le 09-07-2014 à 16:15:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous!
Je viens de terminer mon CV en anglais, et il y a évidemment des fautes de style et de grammaire. Est-ce qu'un anglophone expert en la matière pourrait corriger les fautes que j'ai faites. Je vous remercie par avance, je pense que ça devrait prendre max 10 minutes.
Merci pour vos réponses
May – June 2014: xxx Paris: Reception and control of spectators
January – March 2014: xxx: Account Manager
August - November 2013: xxx : Account Manager
- Establishment of contracts with curtomers (in french, english, and spanish)
- Additional selling (assurances, upsell, baby seat, GPS,…)
- Answer customer’s questions, manage car’s back
- Two weeks in two other xxx store
- Deliver cars and trucks
June - July 2013: xxx: Commercial
- Take meetings with responsible of some important french companies
- Meeting, then selling of our products (activities for employees, like sport, fun workshop etc.)
May – June 2013: xxx: Telephone interviewer
Telephone interview all around France, to get informations about french’s phone subscription, and their habituds of consomation
October 2012 – May 2013: Musician in a professional musical group
September 2012: xxx
Seller- adviser
Mai 2011 – Décembre 2011: xxx
- Commercial, selling of hight class materials for parisian’s hotels
- Create publicity to promote our materials
Avril 2011: xxx Patrimoine: Finance & savings / xxxx
From a call center, the objectiv was to get interview with local customers
• 2010 – 2012: BTS Négociation et Relation Client (+2), Itic Business school of xxx
• 2009 – 2010: LEA English - Spanish – xxx University
• 2009: High school diploma. Speciality: Literature and english
French : Native language
Fluent/Profesional English
Conversational Spanish
Clasic Office (Word, Excel, PowerPoint)
Microsoft Visual C, C++, Express 2008 (logiciel programation)
Sarbacane (Logiciel to make publicity)
Various sport (swimning for fitness) – Political life – Actualities etc.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-07-2014 16:33
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Message de paris1357 posté le 09-07-2014 à 16:15:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous!
Je viens de terminer mon CV en anglais, et il y a évidemment des fautes de style et de grammaire. Est-ce qu'un anglophone expert en la matière pourrait corriger les fautes que j'ai faites. Je vous remercie par avance, je pense que ça devrait prendre max 10 minutes.
Merci pour vos réponses
May – June 2014: xxx Paris: Reception and control of spectators
January – March 2014: xxx: Account Manager
August - November 2013: xxx : Account Manager
- Establishment of contracts with curtomers (in french, english, and spanish)
- Additional selling (assurances, upsell, baby seat, GPS,…)
- Answer customer’s questions, manage car’s back
- Two weeks in two other xxx store
- Deliver cars and trucks
June - July 2013: xxx: Commercial
- Take meetings with responsible of some important french companies
- Meeting, then selling of our products (activities for employees, like sport, fun workshop etc.)
May – June 2013: xxx: Telephone interviewer
Telephone interview all around France, to get informations about french’s phone subscription, and their habituds of consomation
October 2012 – May 2013: Musician in a professional musical group
September 2012: xxx
Seller- adviser
Mai 2011 – Décembre 2011: xxx
- Commercial, selling of hight class materials for parisian’s hotels
- Create publicity to promote our materials
Avril 2011: xxx Patrimoine: Finance & savings / xxxx
From a call center, the objectiv was to get interview with local customers
• 2010 – 2012: BTS Négociation et Relation Client (+2), Itic Business school of xxx
• 2009 – 2010: LEA English - Spanish – xxx University
• 2009: High school diploma. Speciality: Literature and english
French : Native language
Fluent/Profesional English
Conversational Spanish
Clasic Office (Word, Excel, PowerPoint)
Microsoft Visual C, C++, Express 2008 (logiciel programation)
Sarbacane (Logiciel to make publicity)
Various sport (swimning for fitness) – Political life – Actualities etc.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-07-2014 16:33
Anonymat requis.
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