Correction/apprendre l'anglais

Correction/apprendre l'anglais
Message de yaya18 posté le 15-01-2015 à 21:18:30 (S | E | F)
Hello everyone
It's been a long time I haven't posted a subject in the forum, but now I need your help.
If anyone could correct my text, it will would be very nice of you ;)
Thank you for any reply.

At the age of 8, I learnt my first english word : "Hello", I don't know why but at this time I fell in love with this language !
During my primary/elementary years, we have been learning a lots of words and sentences such as : "Cat" "What's your name ?" "How are you"...
I know the difficulty of these words was very high, but it also was the beginning of a long learning.
However , during the secondary school I totally forgot it... I was never available to improve myself in english by learning some grammatical points or anything else.
Moreover, in the school my teachers weren't dynamic so unfortunately I was bored so quikly and I had already learnt the lesson that the teacher taught us (my class)...

(A few years later)
I'm finally in high school ! Before being in high school, I bought some books of english writer especially David Irving (What a amazing writer !) and I watched 5 or 6 series in english (Desperate Housewives, Awkward, Skins and so on...). I made a TOEFL test 1 month ago and to my great astonishment I reached the level B2 !
Even though I know it's not finished, there still are 2 levels (C1 and C2)...

I hope I haven't done too many mistakes, see you soon

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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-01-2015 21:39

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Réponse: Correction/apprendre l'anglais de gerondif, postée le 15-01-2015 à 23:42:08 (S | E)
Hello,

At the age of 8, I learnt my first english (majuscule) word : "Hello", I don't know why but at this time I fell (les mots sont corrects mais on dira plutôt: It was then that I fell ...)in love with this language !
During my primary/elementary years, [(date, donc prétérit!!we have been learning (impossible de mettre un present perfect avec une date qui requiert un prétérit) , a lots(c'est soit a lot of, soit lots of) of words and sentences such as : "Cat" "What's your name ?" "How are you"...
I know the difficulty of these words wasn't very high, but it also was(dans l'autre sens) the beginning of a long learning.
However , during the secondary school I totally forgot it... I was never available to improve myself in english by learning some grammatical points or anything else.
Moreover, in the school my teachers weren't dynamic so unfortunately I was bored so quickly and I had already learnt the lesson that the teacher taught us (my class)...

(A few years later)
I'm finally in high school ! Before being in high school, I bought some books (plutôt by) of english writer especially David Irving (What an amazing writer !) and I watched 5 or 6 series in english (Desperate Housewives, Awkward, Skins and so on...). I made(on dit: to take an exam, to sit for an exam ) a TOEFL test 1 month ago and to my great astonishment I reached the B2 level !
Even though I know it's not finished, there still are (dans l'autre sens) 2 levels (C1 and C2)...

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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-01-2015 08:05
Bug police réparé

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Réponse: Correction/apprendre l'anglais de yaya18, postée le 16-01-2015 à 16:04:52 (S | E)
Hello again,
Thank you for spending your time to correct me, I made a correction and I hope it's better now

At the age of 8, I learnt my first English word : "Hello", I don't know why but it was then that I fell in love with this language !
During my primary/elementary years, we learnt a lot of words and sentences such as : "Cat" "What's your name ?" "How are you"...
I know the difficulty of these words wasn't very high, but it was also the beginning of a long learning.
However , during the secondary school I totally forgot it... I was never available to improve myself in english by learning some grammatical points or anything else.
Moreover, in the school my teachers weren't dynamic so unfortunately I was bored so quickly and I had already learnt the lesson that the teacher taught us (my class)...

(A few years later)
I'm finally in high school ! Before being in high school, I bought some books of english writer especially David Irving (What an amazing writer !) and I watched 5 or 6 series in English (Desperate Housewives, Awkward, Skins and so on...). I took a TOEFL exam 1 month ago and to my great astonishment I reached the B2 level !
Even though I know it's not finished, there are still 2 levels (C1 and C2)...

See you soon

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Réponse: Correction/apprendre l'anglais de gerondif, postée le 18-01-2015 à 16:12:15 (S | E)
Hello,
Hello again,

At the age of 8, I learnt my first English word : "Hello", I don't know why but it was then that I fell in love with this language !
During my primary/elementary years, we learnt a lot of words and sentences such as : "Cat" "What's your name ?" "How are you"...
I know the difficulty of these words wasn't very high, but it was also the beginning of a long learning.
However , during the secondary school I totally forgot it... I was never available/ ready/willing/ to improve myself in English by learning some grammatical points or anything else.
Moreover, in the school my teachers weren't dynamic so unfortunately I was always bored so quickly and I had already learnt (understood) the lesson that the teacher taught us (my class)...

(A few years later)
I'm (finally) in high school at last ! Before being in high school, I bought some books of english(majuscule) writer especially David Irving (What an amazing writer !) and I watched 5 or 6 series in English (Desperate Housewives, Awkward, Skins and so on...). I took a TOEFL exam 1 month ago and to my great astonishment I reached the B2 level !
Even though ("même si" ne convient pas vu qu'il n'y a pas de pendant à "même si", however conviendrait mieux) I know it's not finished, there are still 2 levels (C1 and C2)...

See you soon

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