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Message de helpme posté le 23-03-2016 à 16:47:21 (S | E | F)
Salut Bonjour tout le monde
Je dois décrire une affiche publicitaire de mon choix en anglais et j'ai choisi celle-ci :
Lien internet
Je suis assez faible en anglais, voici ce que j'ai fait :
Slide 1
The advertising that i Will describe now is an it’s an billboard.
He was set up in 2013 in the united kingdom. the author is the British Governement, precisely the “tory” gourvenement. (The tory government) it's the Conservative.
The compaign name is “GO HOME”
Slide 2
The particularity of this advertising is the transmission mode, indeed, they billboard are shackled and exposed on trucks. Particulary those who cross the borders.
The first trucks with the posters first appeared in six districts in North London
Slide 3 : The context
I will introduce the context of this advertising.
For some years, united kingdom and Europe have experienced several migration crisis.
Slide 4 : The description
in the background, we can see a black image with handcuffs and an inscription “Home office” (It’s the executive department of the English government)
In the foreground, we can see several inscription :
In the top left hand corner “ In the UK illegality” It’s a message message directly intended for migrants.
On the right: “106 arrest last week in your area”, it’s a message wrote in order to scary them.
In the middle, you can see the principal message : Go home or face arrest, text home to 78070 for free advice, and help with travel documents.
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Merci pour vos réponses
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-03-2016 22:44
Message de helpme posté le 23-03-2016 à 16:47:21 (S | E | F)
Je dois décrire une affiche publicitaire de mon choix en anglais et j'ai choisi celle-ci :
Lien internet
Je suis assez faible en anglais, voici ce que j'ai fait :
Slide 1
The advertising that i Will describe now is an it’s an billboard.
He was set up in 2013 in the united kingdom. the author is the British Governement, precisely the “tory” gourvenement. (The tory government) it's the Conservative.
The compaign name is “GO HOME”
Slide 2
The particularity of this advertising is the transmission mode, indeed, they billboard are shackled and exposed on trucks. Particulary those who cross the borders.
The first trucks with the posters first appeared in six districts in North London
Slide 3 : The context
I will introduce the context of this advertising.
For some years, united kingdom and Europe have experienced several migration crisis.
Slide 4 : The description
in the background, we can see a black image with handcuffs and an inscription “Home office” (It’s the executive department of the English government)
In the foreground, we can see several inscription :
In the top left hand corner “ In the UK illegality” It’s a message message directly intended for migrants.
On the right: “106 arrest last week in your area”, it’s a message wrote in order to scary them.
In the middle, you can see the principal message : Go home or face arrest, text home to 78070 for free advice, and help with travel documents.
Merci pour vos réponses
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-03-2016 22:44
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