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Message de djazaira posté le 11-05-2016 à 11:39:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai terminé la présentation de ma notion mythes et héros; si quelqu'un pouvait me donner son avis et voir éventuellement s'il y avait des fautes je serais ravi.
Merci de votre aide.
a celebrity serves of model for numerous people who are filled with admiration for her. The term of heroism can take several senses according to the acts. Sometimes it is about the gratitude of a difficult course.
It is the case of Oprah Winfrey, she had a difficult childhood. She was victim of abuse when her mother was absent. At 14 years old, Oprah is got pregnant but the child died. Further to this drama she left living at her father's this is when her life changed. She became one of the people the richest in the USA. She has her own TV show. She has been called "the most powerful woman il the world". Further her course she received numerous awards. President Obama awarded Oprah Winfrey the Presidential Medal of freedom.
The term of hero can also take shape further to heroic acts.
It is the case of Brad Pitt, he is the one of the most famous actor in the world, but he is also an humanitarian for many causes in the world. He created his foundation "Make it right" after hurricane Katrina. He made build new houses for the victims of New Orleans, he also donates. If an association is represented by a celebrity it allows be better know. Millions of people are inspired by the musics, the sport and film, so we should use that inspiration to communicate the injustices in the world.
In conclusion, a celebrity can be defined as a hero it is thanks to its course, its acts.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-05-2016 14:47
Message de djazaira posté le 11-05-2016 à 11:39:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai terminé la présentation de ma notion mythes et héros; si quelqu'un pouvait me donner son avis et voir éventuellement s'il y avait des fautes je serais ravi.
Merci de votre aide.
a celebrity serves of model for numerous people who are filled with admiration for her. The term of heroism can take several senses according to the acts. Sometimes it is about the gratitude of a difficult course.
It is the case of Oprah Winfrey, she had a difficult childhood. She was victim of abuse when her mother was absent. At 14 years old, Oprah is got pregnant but the child died. Further to this drama she left living at her father's this is when her life changed. She became one of the people the richest in the USA. She has her own TV show. She has been called "the most powerful woman il the world". Further her course she received numerous awards. President Obama awarded Oprah Winfrey the Presidential Medal of freedom.
The term of hero can also take shape further to heroic acts.
It is the case of Brad Pitt, he is the one of the most famous actor in the world, but he is also an humanitarian for many causes in the world. He created his foundation "Make it right" after hurricane Katrina. He made build new houses for the victims of New Orleans, he also donates. If an association is represented by a celebrity it allows be better know. Millions of people are inspired by the musics, the sport and film, so we should use that inspiration to communicate the injustices in the world.
In conclusion, a celebrity can be defined as a hero it is thanks to its course, its acts.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-05-2016 14:47
Réponse: Bac/Myths et héros de laure95, postée le 15-05-2016 à 14:07:00 (S | E)
Bonjour,
-celebrity serves of model: mal dit.
- Sometimes it is about the gratitude of a difficult course: ?
- She was (article)victim.
- At 14 years old: at the age of 14.
- Oprah is got pregnant: temps?
- she left living: mal dit.
- one of the people the richest: ordre des mots.
- She has been called: she is called.
- shape further: ?
- he is the (pas de THE) one of the most famous actor in the world,
- it allows be better know: ?
- the musics: pas de THE + mettre au singulier.
- it is thanks to its (pas le bon possessif) course, its acts.
Conclusion trop courte.
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