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Message de emad2015 posté le 22-12-2016 à 20:16:33 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte, s'il vous plait ?
Et merci d'avance ! Je pense qu'il y a répétition de quelques mots et j'aimerais que vousme prêter concours m'aidiez à les éviter.
Hate speech is something awful that we don't like to see neither to hear. It should have solutions to be resolved. Among them, some person benifits from the freedom of expressions which is bad. In fact, taking freedom of expressions as an appeal procedure to justify hate speech is harming the soceity or the person who believes in this speech. Secondly, the freedom which produces prejudice to a freedom of others is not considerated as freedom. It's exactly that case that we deal with. That's why the fact that freedom of expression justifies hate speech is not a perfect idea to fix the problem. To sum up, I think we shouldn't allow citizens to do that acts in order to see the peace in the world.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-12-2016 21:54
Message de emad2015 posté le 22-12-2016 à 20:16:33 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
Pourriez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte, s'il vous plait ?
Et merci d'avance ! Je pense qu'il y a répétition de quelques mots et j'aimerais que vous
Hate speech is something awful that we don't like to see neither to hear. It should have solutions to be resolved. Among them, some person benifits from the freedom of expressions which is bad. In fact, taking freedom of expressions as an appeal procedure to justify hate speech is harming the soceity or the person who believes in this speech. Secondly, the freedom which produces prejudice to a freedom of others is not considerated as freedom. It's exactly that case that we deal with. That's why the fact that freedom of expression justifies hate speech is not a perfect idea to fix the problem. To sum up, I think we shouldn't allow citizens to do that acts in order to see the peace in the world.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-12-2016 21:54
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