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Message de heavydirtycat posté le 25-02-2017 à 21:20:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous !
J'aimerais une petite correction de ce texte,s'il vous plait :
The Irish War of Independence or the Tan War was a guerrilla war that lasted from 1919 to 1921 between the Irish Republican Army (IRA) and the British security forces in Ireland. Ireland doesn’t want to be under British rule. So, Irishs demanded the Ireland Independence at the British. And thus, l’IRA organised the resistance versus British State until 1921: But everything broke down and violence set in the day where IRA killed two officers of the RIC, the Royal Irish Constabulary. These murders was the beginning of a dark time of guerrilla: so the RIC retaliated and decided to trash everything in their way. They killed a lot of innocents, tortured, raped women, looted and burned villages.
Merci beaucoup à vous et bonne soirée
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-02-2017 21:45
Message de heavydirtycat posté le 25-02-2017 à 21:20:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous !
J'aimerais une petite correction de ce texte,s'il vous plait :
The Irish War of Independence or the Tan War was a guerrilla war that lasted from 1919 to 1921 between the Irish Republican Army (IRA) and the British security forces in Ireland. Ireland doesn’t want to be under British rule. So, Irishs demanded the Ireland Independence at the British. And thus, l’IRA organised the resistance versus British State until 1921: But everything broke down and violence set in the day where IRA killed two officers of the RIC, the Royal Irish Constabulary. These murders was the beginning of a dark time of guerrilla: so the RIC retaliated and decided to trash everything in their way. They killed a lot of innocents, tortured, raped women, looted and burned villages.
Merci beaucoup à vous et bonne soirée
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-02-2017 21:45
Réponse : Indépendance/ Irlande de heavydirtycat, postée le 26-02-2017 à 14:39:29 (S | E)
Up !
Réponse : Indépendance/ Irlande de gerondif, postée le 26-02-2017 à 17:00:35 (S | E)
Bonjour
Vous avez pris et traduit quelques phrases éparses de ce document mais ça ne reflète pas la situation .
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The Irish War of Independence or the Tan War was a guerrilla war that lasted from 1919 to 1921 between the Irish Republican Army (IRA) and the British security forces in Ireland. Ireland doesn’t (prétérit)want to be under British rule. So, Irishs demanded the
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