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Message de rjma22 posté le 03-12-2022 à 17:51:08 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai besoin d'aide pour mon oral d'anglais s'il vous plait , merci d'avance pour votre aide.
On weekdays I wake up at ten to seven on Mondays, Thursdays and Fridays but not on Tuesdays I wake up at ten past seven and on Wednesdays at eight o'clock then I get dressed, on make my bed then go on my phone. After that I do my hair and it often takes me some time, wash my face and brush my teeth then i wait till twenty-five past seven and often I leave home and go to school. I start classes at eight o'clock and in the afternoons we have other classes and I usually finish school a five o'clock after school I go back home then
I lave dinner
then I do my home work and I draw and I chat with my friends on the phone then I go to in the evenings usually sleep. At weekends I wake up at often half past nine or half paste ten, I get dressed, on make my bed then go on my phone. I draw and I lave dinner and I do my home work.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-12-2022 18:02
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Message de rjma22 posté le 03-12-2022 à 17:51:08 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai besoin d'aide pour mon oral d'anglais s'il vous plait , merci d'avance pour votre aide.
On weekdays I wake up at ten to seven on Mondays, Thursdays and Fridays but not on Tuesdays I wake up at ten past seven and on Wednesdays at eight o'clock then I get dressed, on make my bed then go on my phone. After that I do my hair and it often takes me some time, wash my face and brush my teeth then i wait till twenty-five past seven and often I leave home and go to school. I start classes at eight o'clock and in the afternoons we have other classes and I usually finish school a five o'clock after school I go back home then
I lave dinner
then I do my home work and I draw and I chat with my friends on the phone then I go to in the evenings usually sleep. At weekends I wake up at often half past nine or half paste ten, I get dressed, on make my bed then go on my phone. I draw and I lave dinner and I do my home work.------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 03-12-2022 18:02
Nous ne corrigeons pas, nous indiquons les fautes.
Réponse : Oral /anglais de laure95, postée le 04-12-2022 à 11:15:00 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- on
make my bed- go on my phone: mal dit: on ne va pas au téléphone!
- I do my hair: on brosse ses cheveux!
- then i (majuscule) wait till twenty-five past seven
- and often (a quoi se réfère le "often"? )I leave home and go to school.
- after school I go back home then: répétition: choisir entre then et after
- I lave (faute de frappe?)dinner
- home work: en un seul mot.
- and (enlever and et mettre une virgule) I draw and I chat
- then (trop de then dans votre texte)I go to in the evenings usually sleep
- half paste (faute de frappe?) ten,
- on (?,) make my bed then (sujet)go on my phone (mal dit). I draw and I lave
dinner and (trop de and) I do my home work (voir remarque plus haut).Réponse : Oral /anglais de rjma22, postée le 04-12-2022 à 16:26:43 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide.
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