Let's suggest 95/ Taking it easy 41

Let's suggest 95/ Taking it easy 41
Message de here4u posté le 16-10-2025 à 21:52:01 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,

Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...

Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre : This is a Second Chance exercise. J'ai repris un sujet par semaine qui n'avait pas été travaillé.

1. «Is it easy for you to say: «No, sorry, I can’t!»?

2. «Do you think appearances are important?»

3. «Is a good education essential to have a ‘good job'?"

4. «'I am what I am...' Your comments...»


Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé le mardi 28 octobre 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 95/ Taking it easy 41 de here4u, postée le 18-10-2025 à 17:49:11 (S | E)
Hello dears!

Here is our first ANSWER, from Magie who's slowly recovering but still very tired... ! dear for making such an effort!

ANSWER A: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy!

Do you think appearences are important?

Proverbs say: You can't judge a book by his cover or looks can be deceiving.
In my opinion, having a beautiful appearance is a mark of respect for oneself and others. An elegant person, clean, comfortable in their suit, smiling with polished elocution is still more attractive. Although this does not mean that the person is honest. However, she is intelligent and talented and good educated enough to at least appear so. You have to know a person before forming an opinion.
As far as I am concerned, between two candidates of the same value, I would give priority to the candidate who has the best presentation, getting to know him/her better. I think that it is more pleasant to work with an elegant colleague, than with someone who is poorly groomed and dressed without taste. Nevertheless it is still possible to help a person to improve their poor look.

for your help!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 95/ Taking it easy 41 de gerold, postée le 19-10-2025 à 09:52:25 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy!

Do you think appearances are important?

A very good text Magie!

Proverbs say: You can't judge a book by his cover or looks can be deceiving.
In my opinion, having a beautiful appearance is a mark of respect for oneself and others. An elegant person, clean, comfortable in their suit, smiling with polished elocution is still (meaning?) more attractive (punctuation). Although this does not mean that the person is honest. However, she is intelligent and talented and good educated enough to at least appear so. You have to know a person before forming an opinion.
As far as I am concerned, between two candidates of the same value, I would give priority to the candidate who has the best presentation, getting to know him/her (something missing to make this sentence clearer?) better. I think that it is more pleasant to work with an elegant colleague, (punctuation) than with someone who is poorly groomed and dressed without taste. Nevertheless it is still (meaning?) possible to help a person to improve their poor look.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 95/ Taking it easy 41 de here4u, postée le 20-10-2025 à 17:44:13 (S | E)
Hello dears,

Green allowed!

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Réponse : Let's suggest 95/ Taking it easy 41 de gerold, postée le 21-10-2025 à 12:19:53 (S | E)
Hello!

Proverbs say: You can't judge a book by its cover or looks can be deceiving.
In my opinion, having a beautiful appearance is a mark of respect for oneself and others. An elegant person, clean, comfortable in their suit, smiling with polished elocution is still more attractive (do you mean even more or always more ?), although this does not mean that the person is honest. However, he or she/they are intelligent and talented and well-educated* enough to at least appear** so. You have to know a person before forming an opinion.
As far as I am concerned, between two candidates of the same value, I would give priority to the candidate who has the best presentation, trying to get to know him or her (or them) better. I think that it is more pleasant to work with an elegant colleague, no comma than with someone who is poorly groomed and dressed without taste. Nevertheless it is still (always?) possible to help a person to improve their poor look.

"Well-educated is not exactly "bien éduqué". Do you mean well-mannered?
** "to at least appear" is a split infinitive. It seems to be generally accepted now, although some people might consider this is wrong.

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