Let's suggest/ 119 - Taking it easy/ 65

Let's suggest/ 119 - Taking it easy/ 65
Message de here4u posté le 18-10-2026 à 23:16:54 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,

Comme l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, il nous faut nous y entraîner, même si c'est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Another easy exercice that everyone can do! Let's write together...

Certains m'avaient dit être gênés d'exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l'impression - souvent fausse - de les exprimer maladroitement ). D'autre part, vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :

1) "A woman's job is never done!"

2) If you could choose your Xmas present, what would it be?

3) What is your favourite famous monument?

Répondez à 1 ou 2 questions au choix en mp en notant bien les références - et développez celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu'à atteindre en tout un maximum d'environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d'abord pendant deux jours, sans donner 'votre solution') puis en vert, en suggérant une ou des solutions. Une fois le premier texte 'corrigé' au mieux par d'autres membres, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé le jeudi 29 octobre 2026 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

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Réponse : Let's suggest/ 119 - Taking it easy/ 65 de here4u, postée le 21-10-2026 à 10:37:16 (S | E)
Hello,

Quelques ennuis techniques ont retardé la publication de cette première réponse... AHHHHHHHH Computers are not always user-friendly...
Répondez vite, car une deuxième réponse attend déjà d'être traitée ! à vous !

ANSWER A: topic 3: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.

Among all the monuments I have seen in the four corners of the world, I was the most impressed by ? the TAJ MAHAL located at AGRA in India.
The TAJ MAHAL is a mausoleum built by the Mughal Emperor Shah Jahan in memory of his favorite, beloved wife Muntaz Mahal to house her tomb. Then it is also housed of Shah Jahar himself.
Jahan and Muntaz were married during 19 years and were an inseparable couple who loved each other deeply. Muntaz Mahal died aftergiving birth to their 14th child.
Started in 1631 the construction of all the buildings and gardens occupied 20,000 workers and craftsmen during 22 years.
The TAJ MAHAL is a masterpiece which attracts millions of tourists a year.
Imagine a huge dome all in white marble surrounded by 4 other smaller ones rising on a large sand stone quadrilateral, itself covered with black or white marble panels inlaid with precious and semi-precious stones. These stones aligned to form tall spires, flowers, fruits, mixed with calligraphy. The whole thing is flanked by 4 huge minarets.
IT IS BREATHBREAKING
I stayed a whole day from dawn to sunset. The entire building is reflected in a water pool; its colors change according to the sun light.
Not only is the monument a love message, but it evokes wealth, at the same time harmony,
purity, spirituality. On this site, I felt calm and happy.


to the writer, and to all of you for your future help!

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Réponse : Let's suggest/ 119 - Taking it easy/ 65 de gerold, postée le 21-10-2026 à 12:20:48 (S | E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: topic 3: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.

An interesting text

Among all the monuments I have seen in the four corners of the world, I was the most impressed by ? the TAJ MAHAL located at AGRA in India.
The TAJ MAHAL is a mausoleum built by the Mughal Emperor Shah Jahan in memory of his favorite, beloved wife Muntaz Mahal to house her tomb. Then it is also housed of Shah Jahar himself.
Jahan and Muntaz were married during 19 years and were an inseparable couple who loved each other deeply. Muntaz Mahal died aftergiving birth to their 14th child.
Started in 1631 the construction of all the buildings and gardens occupied 20,000 workers and craftsmen during 22 years.
The TAJ MAHAL is a masterpiece which attracts millions of tourists a year.
Imagine a huge dome all in white marble surrounded by 4 other smaller ones rising on a large sand stone quadrilateral, itself covered with black or white marble panels inlaid with precious and semi-precious stones. These stones aligned to form tall spires, flowers, fruits, mixed with calligraphy. The whole thing is flanked by 4 huge minarets.
IT IS BREATHBREAKING
I stayed a whole day from dawn to sunset. The entire building is reflected in a water pool; its colors change according to the sun light.
Not only is the monument a love message, but it evokes wealth, xx at the same time harmony,
purity, spirituality. On this site, I felt calm and happy.

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