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Message from jasna posted on 02-10-2011 at 06:27:27 (D | E | F)
Hello everybody,

I am new in this forum. Please could you help me with the text below that I am preparing for an interview.

Here are the sentences:
I’m Jasna Gora.
I graduated in 2003 in economic management. I have worked with national and international NGO such as UNDP, ILO, LL etc. since 2004 in administration as operation assistant, administration manager and executive secretary.
With that experience I believe I can make a positive contribution for your company.
I am persistent and open to new ideas and suggestion to improve my job.
My weakness is I realize my English capacity that’s very poor, but base on my experiences I believe that I will do the best in this position.

Thanks a lot for the help.
Jasna

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Edited by lucile83 on 02-10-2011 07:47

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Re: Grammar/interview from gerondif, posted on 02-10-2011 at 18:27:49 (D | E)
Hello,

I’m Jasna Gora.(My name is ........)
I graduated in 2003 in economic management. I have worked with national and international NGO such as UNDP, ILO, LL etc. since 2004 in the administration as operation assistant, administration manager and executive secretary.
With that experience I believe I can make a positive contribution for (be very useful for) your company.
I am persistent and open to new ideas and suggestions to improve my job.
My weakness is I realize my English capacity that’s very poor, but based on my experiences(I would leave it singular) I believe that I will do the best(sounds bizarre, it is too close to "I will do my best")(maybe say: I believe that I can fill this position perfectly) in this position.

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Re: Grammar/interview from jasna, posted on 03-10-2011 at 02:57:43 (D | E)
Hi gerondif and lucile83,

Many thanks for your help with my question ;that's very useful for me.
Regards,
jasna

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Edited by lucile83 on 03-10-2011 08:33

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Re: Grammar/interview from sherry48, posted on 03-10-2011 at 15:17:20 (D | E)
Hello jasna.

My name is Jasna Gora.
I graduated in 2003 (with a degree?)in economic management. I have worked with national and international NGO such as UNDP, ILO, LL etc. since 2004 in the administration as *(article?) operation assistant, administration (or administrative?) manager and executive secretary.
With that (this) experience I believe I can make a positive contribution for (you contribute to not for) your company.
I am persistent and open to new ideas and suggestions to improve my job.
My weakness is I realize my English capacity that’s very poor, (If you want to present yourself in the best light, perhaps something like this...Although my English could still be improved, I believe my experience has given me the qualifications needed to fill this position to your satisfaction. (This is just one possibility among many).

Sherry

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Re: Grammar/interview from jasna, posted on 04-10-2011 at 05:03:38 (D | E)
Hi Sherry,

Thanks for your answer, that very which makes me improve my grammar for the interview session.

Regards

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Edited by lucile83 on 04-10-2011 08:25

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