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Correction/résumé de BD
Message de miol posté le 28-12-2011 à 11:47:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un exercice à faire pour la rentrée, à savoir résumer une petite BD.
Mon résumé donne ceci, quelqu'un peut-il me le corriger s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour votre aide.
This cartoon deals with difficulties that a person can meet when she welcomes a new flatmate in her house. Indeed, in the beginning, the main character, Nina, seems to be happy to welcome Sharyn's German boyfriend, Jens, in their house. However, some problems began to appear noticeably because Nina doesn't like Jens. She can't bear him because he spends his time smoking, drinking, listening to music, and he's really lazy. So, in the end, Nina asked him specifically to leave the house, but she finally retracted because she didn't have the strength to throw him out.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-12-2011 13:52
Message de miol posté le 28-12-2011 à 11:47:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un exercice à faire pour la rentrée, à savoir résumer une petite BD.
Mon résumé donne ceci, quelqu'un peut-il me le corriger s'il vous plaît?
Merci pour votre aide.
This cartoon deals with difficulties that a person can meet when she welcomes a new flatmate in her house. Indeed, in the beginning, the main character, Nina, seems to be happy to welcome Sharyn's German boyfriend, Jens, in their house. However, some problems began to appear noticeably because Nina doesn't like Jens. She can't bear him because he spends his time smoking, drinking, listening to music, and he's really lazy. So, in the end, Nina asked him specifically to leave the house, but she finally retracted because she didn't have the strength to throw him out.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-12-2011 13:52
Réponse: Correction/résumé de BD de notrepere, postée le 29-12-2011 à 03:56:38 (S | E)
Hello Bon travail!This cartoon deals with (article manquant) difficulties that a person can meet when she welcomes a new flatmate into her house. Indeed, in the beginning, the main character, Nina, seems to be happy to welcome Sharyn's German boyfriend, Jens, into their house. However, some problems began to appear, noticeably because Nina doesn't like Jens. She can't bear him because he spends his time smoking, drinking, listening to music, and he's really lazy. So, in the end, Nina asked him specifically to leave the house, but she finally retracted because she didn't have the strength to throw him out.
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