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Message de mibouche posté le 02-08-2013 à 14:59:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
en utilisant le vocabulaire "Vendre et acheter", j'ai rédigé un exercice. Quelqu'un peut-il ,svp s'il vous plaît, le vérifier ?
D'avance merci.
Today, I want to buy a new pants that cost 35€. That’s not so expensive even I could buy two cheap pants for the same price.
I go windows shopping with my girl friend. I can afford a pair of shoes. During sales it’s worth buying clothes. If you need to buy clothes during this period, you can save money. No need to bargain. The price are fixed.
Some products look affordable but look at quality. You can have free advice from the staff. The staff is fair and welcomes you during sales period.
There is a shop that sells second-hand items. They offers to customer good service.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-08-2013 22:23
Message de mibouche posté le 02-08-2013 à 14:59:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
en utilisant le vocabulaire "Vendre et acheter", j'ai rédigé un exercice. Quelqu'un peut-il ,
D'avance merci.
Today, I want to buy a new pants that cost 35€. That’s not so expensive even I could buy two cheap pants for the same price.
I go windows shopping with my girl friend. I can afford a pair of shoes. During sales it’s worth buying clothes. If you need to buy clothes during this period, you can save money. No need to bargain. The price are fixed.
Some products look affordable but look at quality. You can have free advice from the staff. The staff is fair and welcomes you during sales period.
There is a shop that sells second-hand items. They offers to customer good service.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-08-2013 22:23
Réponse: Sujet / achats ventes de myrtlereddy, postée le 04-08-2013 à 21:56:00 (S | E)
Hello,
Today, I want to buy a new pants that cost 35€. That’s not so expensive even
I could buy two cheap pants for the same price.I go Est-ce que vous y êtes allé aujourd'hui? window-shopping with my girlfriend. I can afford a pair of shoes. During sales it’s worth buying clothes. If you need to buy clothes during this period, you can save money. No need to bargain.
Some products look affordable but watch the quality! You can have free advice from the staff. The staff is fair and welcome
There is a shop that sells second-hand items. They offer s good service to customers.
Commentaire: regardez le pluriel de pants. Est-ce qu'on dit "a pants???". Je ne crois pas, il faut rajouter quelque chose.
Staff est souvent utilisé au pluriel car c'est un groupe de personnes: the staff ARE nice. The police ARE nice.
A vous de corriger ce qui est en rose et de répondre à mes questions en vert et de remplacer les
par le mot qui manque. Bon courage 
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-08-2013 07:03
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