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Message from sikandari36 posted on 08-08-2013 at 16:04:59 (D | E | F)
Hi,
this a letter of application for activity coordinator , can you please correct it?
Dear Mrs Sykes,
I am writing to apply for the position of activity coordinator at the Children's Club, as advertised at the local youth centre.
I am a very joyful person with a fun loving personality, added to this I love children and therefore I would enjoy giving them swimming as well as other sports lessons , because I am a sportsperson.
I have had some experience of this kind of job as I have worked as a volunteer in a local sports club as a assistant basketball teacher. In addition to this I have also participated in marathons.
I feel I would be suitable for the job as I am a skilled swimmer and I have won a gold medal at state level swimming competition.
I have enclosed a copy of my curriculum vitae, which will give you further details. I hope this information will be sufficient for you to consider my application. If you need further details please do not hesitate to contact me. I could make myself available for an interview at any time.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
name and surname
Thanks in advance for helping me.
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Edited by lucile83 on 08-08-2013 18:01
Message from sikandari36 posted on 08-08-2013 at 16:04:59 (D | E | F)
Hi,
this a letter of application for activity coordinator , can you please correct it?
Dear Mrs Sykes,
I am writing to apply for the position of activity coordinator at the Children's Club, as advertised at the local youth centre.
I am a very joyful person with a fun loving personality, added to this I love children and therefore I would enjoy giving them swimming as well as other sports lessons , because I am a sportsperson.
I have had some experience of this kind of job as I have worked as a volunteer in a local sports club as a assistant basketball teacher. In addition to this I have also participated in marathons.
I feel I would be suitable for the job as I am a skilled swimmer and I have won a gold medal at state level swimming competition.
I have enclosed a copy of my curriculum vitae, which will give you further details. I hope this information will be sufficient for you to consider my application. If you need further details please do not hesitate to contact me. I could make myself available for an interview at any time.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
name and surname
Thanks in advance for helping me.
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Edited by lucile83 on 08-08-2013 18:01
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