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Message de skoop posté le 07-12-2014 à 10:37:52 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Can you tell me if my sentences are correct please? Thank you very much
The question is : Quel est le meilleur email ? ( un email informel et l'autre formel ) , qu'est-ce qui fait un bon email ? , à qui écrit-on ce type d'email ?
Firstly, the first email is informal, because we can see many expressions like « Hi Pete », « How’s it going ? I’m feeling great » and ending by « That’s all ». Autor uses contraction « BD » That’s an informal messages to friends or family. The style is friendly and a accuracy is less important.
While the second email is a formal because beginning by « Dears » and ending by « Best wiches », The purpose (business), audience (to a work colleague), style is professional, and accurate spelling is importante.
I think they’re no better email because each one is for a specific person.
To conclued, a good email needs : Beginning and ending, purpose, audience, style and accuracy which must are adapted for the addressee.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-12-2014 11:57
Message de skoop posté le 07-12-2014 à 10:37:52 (S | E | F)
Hello,
Can you tell me if my sentences are correct please? Thank you very much
The question is : Quel est le meilleur email ? ( un email informel et l'autre formel ) , qu'est-ce qui fait un bon email ? , à qui écrit-on ce type d'email ?
Firstly, the first email is informal, because we can see many expressions like « Hi Pete », « How’s it going ? I’m feeling great » and ending by « That’s all ». Autor uses contraction « BD » That’s an informal messages to friends or family. The style is friendly and a accuracy is less important.
While the second email is a formal because beginning by « Dears » and ending by « Best wiches », The purpose (business), audience (to a work colleague), style is professional, and accurate spelling is importante.
I think they’re no better email because each one is for a specific person.
To conclued, a good email needs : Beginning and ending, purpose, audience, style and accuracy which must are adapted for the addressee.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-12-2014 11:57
Réponse: Email/aide de waze, postée le 07-12-2014 à 14:22:06 (S | E)
Hey Skoop
Je suis en phase d'apprentissage pour l'anglais mais je pense avoir trouvé quelques erreurs
Firstly, the first email is informal, because we can see many expressions like « Hi Pete », « How’s it going ? I’m feeling great » and ending by « That’s all ». Autor uses contraction « BD » That’s an informal messages to friends or family. The style is friendly and a accuracy is less important. Je pense que c'est juste accuracy
While the second email is a formal(juste formal) because it beginning by « Dears » and ending by « Best wiches », The purpose (business), audience (to a work colleague), style is professional, and accurate spelling is importante.
I think they’re no better email because each one is for a specific person.
To conclued, a good email needs : a Beginning and ending, purpose, audience, style and accuracy which must are adapted for the addressee.
j'espère t'avoir aidé ( attends la réponse d'autres personnes parce que c'est peut-être faux ce que je viens de te dire après à toi de voir la cohérence de ma correction )
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-12-2014 15:25
Réponse: Email/aide de yaya18, postée le 07-12-2014 à 14:41:57 (S | E)
Autor uses contraction « BD »
I think you should write : "Autor uses the contraction of
a Beginning and ending : Waze, you're not totally wrong but in this context, he can take "a" out
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