Comme des milliers de personnes, recevez gratuitement chaque semaine Oral/ BTS
Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais || En basOral/ BTS
Message de nivek35 posté le 12-02-2016 à 20:54:38 (S | E | F)
Salut tout le monde,
je suis en BTS EEC et je dois réaliser un oral avec une présentation personnelle que vous trouverez ci-dessous. J'aurais besoin d'âmes charitables pour corriger ce texte !! Merci d'avance.
Hello ! My name is K , I am twenty one and I'm currently doing a HND Building Economics at G.
This training center propose of alternating trainings for the adults.
The compagny in wich I carred out my alternate learning is specialised in the commercial amenagement.
It is situated at Betton at five minutes from where I live and its name is URBANI SARL.
The retailers with wich we are working most of the time are “Generale d’Optique” and “ Halle aux chaussures”
During my periods in business I realize, in autonomy, all the administratives tasks
That is to say, I take a totally clean record and I realize:
- Preliminary design
- Building permit
- Of execution record
- The tender consisting to request at company to cipher the work
- The list of company and the construction schedule
After I give the file at foreman who réalizes the site supervision. Usually the foreman it is my boss
Today, I didn't meet problems during the realization of my tasks and project.
To conclude, this work experience has been beneficial for my professional life. I acquired new techniques and I also developed human relationships with employees and professionnals I have met
Finally, I am very satisfied with my work. It gave me an exciting experience on the one hand in a professional view and on the other hand in a personal view. And it is a positive point for the future.
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 12-02-2016 22:02
Message de nivek35 posté le 12-02-2016 à 20:54:38 (S | E | F)
Salut tout le monde,
je suis en BTS EEC et je dois réaliser un oral avec une présentation personnelle que vous trouverez ci-dessous. J'aurais besoin d'âmes charitables pour corriger ce texte !! Merci d'avance.
Hello ! My name is K , I am twenty one and I'm currently doing a HND Building Economics at G.
This training center propose of alternating trainings for the adults.
The compagny in wich I carred out my alternate learning is specialised in the commercial amenagement.
It is situated at Betton at five minutes from where I live and its name is URBANI SARL.
The retailers with wich we are working most of the time are “Generale d’Optique” and “ Halle aux chaussures”
During my periods in business I realize, in autonomy, all the administratives tasks
That is to say, I take a totally clean record and I realize:
- Preliminary design
- Building permit
- Of execution record
- The tender consisting to request at company to cipher the work
- The list of company and the construction schedule
After I give the file at foreman who réalizes the site supervision. Usually the foreman it is my boss
Today, I didn't meet problems during the realization of my tasks and project.
To conclude, this work experience has been beneficial for my professional life. I acquired new techniques and I also developed human relationships with employees and professionnals I have met
Finally, I am very satisfied with my work. It gave me an exciting experience on the one hand in a professional view and on the other hand in a personal view. And it is a positive point for the future.
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 12-02-2016 22:02
Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
INDISPENSABLES : 