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    Correction/ police interview

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    Correction/ police interview
    Message de mareee posté le 07-12-2017 à 10:45:38 (S | E | F)
    Bonjour,
    j'aurais bien besoin de votre aide pour la correction du texte ci-dessous.
    Merci d'avance.

    Hello, did you kidnap the four students ?
    - - No, without a doubt. Who do you think I am? I wouldn’t hurt a fly, let alone have the willpower to kidnap four students.
    - Do you have a good relation with your ex-wife ?
    My ex-wife? Of course I do! *She’s the mother of my daughter so how **could I have a bad relationship with her?
    - Where were you really on January 7th between 7.20 am to 8 o’clock ?
    -Where *was I? I went for a walk in the North Pole.
    -Not really. Between 7:20 and 8 o’ clock I took the bus to go to school, as it appeared to be snowing all of last night and I’m afraid to drive in bad weather.
    -We notice that the 4 students all have a twin brother or sister and they disappeared the same day when your brother died. How did you felt when he died ?
    -When he...died... I was devastated. I loved him so much, *he was my brother..

    -- Part2
    You are the two suspects for this investigation. Do you have a good relation ship ?
    - *I will make myself clear. She is the mother of my daughter and **to me, she is my friends. So why would I be in a bad relationship with her?
    Were you together on January, the 7th ?
    - We were, but not exactly. I only saw her at the bus stop that day.
    It’s the truth, Mary Hogarth. I would never lie, you can ask my lawyer.
    -Do you have an idea of what could have happened ?
    - Oh Marv, I feel sorry for you because you can’t see the truth! Mary was the one that killed them, she’s a psychopath!
    -Kyle, do you have something to add ?
    -I am innocent. (Simple and straight-forward)
    ....
    OKAY, OKAY OKAY! I CONFESS! IT WAS ME! I’VE KIDNAPPED AND KILLED THEM TO AVENGE MY BROTHER!

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 07-12-2017 11:02


    Réponse : Correction/ police interview de gerondif, postée le 08-12-2017 à 20:02:24 (S | E)
    Bonsoir
    erreurs en bleu
    Hello, did you kidnap the four students ?
    - - No, without a doubt.(convient mal. absolutely not) Who do you think I am? I wouldn’t hurt a fly, let alone have the willpower to kidnap four students.
    - Do you have a good relation with your ex-wife ?
    My ex-wife? Of course I do! *She’s the mother of my daughter (my daughter's mother) so how **could I have a bad relationship with her?
    - Where were you really on January (the)7th between 7.20 am to 8 o’clock ?
    -Where *was I? I went for a walk in to the North Pole.
    -Not really. Between 7:20 and 8 o’ clock I took the bus to go to school, as it appeared to be snowing all of last night and I’m afraid to drive(plutôt of +ing) in bad weather.
    -We notice that the 4 students all have(prétérit) a twin brother or sister and they disappeared on the same day when your brother died. How did you felt(base verbale) when he died ?
    -When he...died... I was devastated. I loved him so much, *he was my brother..

    -- Part2
    You are the two suspects for this investigation. Do you have a good relationship ?
    - *I will make myself clear. She is the mother of my daughter(my daughter's mother serait bien plus courant) and **to me, she is my friends. So why would I be in a bad relationship with her?
    Were you together on January, the 7th ?
    - We were, but not exactly. I only saw her at the bus stop that day.
    It’s the truth, Mary Hogarth. I would never lie, you can ask my lawyer.
    -Do you have any idea (of) what could have happened ?
    - Oh Marv, I feel sorry for you because you can’t see the truth! Mary was the one that killed them, she’s a psychopath!
    -Kyle, do you have something to add ?
    -I am innocent. (Simple and straight-forward)
    ....
    OKAY, OKAY OKAY! I CONFESS! IT WAS ME!(maladroit . I did it!) I’VE(plutôt un prétérit) KIDNAPPED AND KILLED THEM TO AVENGE MY BROTHER!




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