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Thème/correction
Message de vaiana posté le 31-12-2018 à 18:32:46 (S | E | F)
Hello and Happy New Year!
To celebrate the New Year ...... I did a translation of an excerpt from French into English !!!
Could you help me to correct it, please?
Thanks!

Cette nuit j’ai fait un drôle de rêve. J’ai rêvé que des enfants se battaient et que l’un d’eux se tournait vers moi et me lançait : « Toi, un jour, je t’arrangerai le portrait. » J’ai regardé hier soir à la télévision une émission sur la chirurgie esthétique. C’est sans doute ce qui a provoqué ce cauchemar. On y expliquait précisément comment on arrangeait le portrait. Maman était littéralement rivée à l’écran. D’habitude quand il y a du sang à la télé, mes parents m’obligent à aller me coucher, mais là ils étaient tellement fascinés qu’ils ont oublié de le faire.

This night, I made an eerie dream. I have dreamed about some children who were fighting and that one of them turned towards me and told me: "One day, I'll change your face around!" I watched on television an emission about plastic surgery yesterday night. That is probably what caused that nightmare. How to arrange the portrait was precisely explained. Mother kept litteraly her eyes riveted on the screen. Usually when there is some blood on television, my parents make me go to bed, but there they were so flabbergasted that they forgot to do it.


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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-12-2018 18:36

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Réponse : Thème/correction de vaiana, postée le 03-01-2019 à 13:34:07 (S | E)
Why?

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Réponse : Thème/correction de lucile83, postée le 03-01-2019 à 16:46:08 (S | E)
Hello,
This night, I made an eerie dream. I have dreamed about some children who were fighting and that one of them turned towards me and told me: "One day, I'll change your face around!" I watched on television ...place à revoir... an emission about plastic surgery yesterday night. That is probably what caused that nightmare. How to arrange the portrait was precisely explained. Mother kept litteraly her eyes riveted on the screen. Usually when there is some blood on television, my parents make me go to bed, but there they were so flabbergasted that they forgot to do it.

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Réponse : Thème/correction de bluestar, postée le 03-01-2019 à 18:55:05 (S | E)
Bonjour...

" I made a dream", "yesterday night".....ne se dit pas en anglais

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Réponse : Thème/correction de vaiana, postée le 03-01-2019 à 20:24:23 (S | E)
Hello and thanks!

Last night, I had a funny dream. I dreamed about some children fighting and one of them turned towards me and told me: "One day, I'll change your face around!" I watched a show about plastic surgery on television yesterday's/last night. That is probably what caused that nightmare. How to arrange the portrait was precisely explained. Mother kept literally her eyes fixed on the screen. Usually when there is some blood on television, my parents make me go to bed, but there they were so flabbergasted that they forgot to do it.

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