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    Mexique/Résumé
    Message de dadoush35 posté le 14-01-2019 à 18:23:51 (S | E | F)
    Bonjour,
    je viens vers vous car j'ai fait un texte sur le Mexique et aimerais savoir si vous voyez des erreurs.
    Je vous remercie par avance de votre aide!!

    Mexico has a A4 country risk cotation.
    With the new American president, Mexico risks to lose a major business partner. It is dependent to the USA, and risks to leave the NAFTA (North American Free Trade Agreement) during the next years, because it is currently being negotiated. Leaving this trade bloc means losing its advantages (in terms of tariffs for example) to do trade with Canada and the United States, this last represents the major import and export partner of Mexico.
    The growth decreased by 1.9% in the last two years and should decline even more due to the violent earthquake from last year, provocating reconstructions. It will also caused the increase of the budget deficit.
    The deficient educative system and infrastructure are also a negative aspect of the country.
    Mexico is dependent of the petrol sector, it represents the third part of the government recipe. A decline of the petrol price could be dramatic for the mexican economy.
    On an other side, the rising crime rate, adding to the corruptions scandals encouraged Mexican population to vote a candidate who had ideas they couldn’t bear in the past. It is the consequence of an politic and economic instability. Adding to this the NAFTA uncertainty, the foreign direct investments went from 2.7 to 2.2 in 2017.

    Merci encore,bonne soirée.

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 14-01-2019 22:54


    Réponse : Mexique/Résumé de gerondif, postée le 14-01-2019 à 18:42:52 (S | E)
    Bonjour
    erreurs en bleu
    Mexico has a A4 country risk cotation.(a se prononce [ei], donc il fautmettre an devant comme devant an ape, an eight.
    With the new American president, Mexico risks to lose(il ne faut pas un infinitif complet mais un gérondif, forme en ing) a major business partner. It is dependent to(double cliquez sur dependent pour voir la bonne préposition) the USA, and risks to leave (gérondif)the NAFTA (North American Free Trade Agreement) during the next years,(during grince) because it(que recouvre ce it ?) is currently being negotiated. Leaving this trade bloc means losing its advantages (in terms of tariffs for example) to do trade with Canada and the United States, this last (manque le nom sur lequel s'appuierait l'adjectif last) represents the major import and export partner of Mexico.
    The growth decreased by 1.9% in the last two years and should decline even more due to the violent earthquake from last year, provocating reconstructions. It will also caused(mauvaise construction du futur) the increase of the budget deficit.
    The deficient educative system and infrastructure are also a negative aspect of the country.
    Mexico is dependent of the petrol sector, it represents the third part(part me semble faux) of the government recipe(recipe, c'est une recette de cuisine, alors que income c'est une recette, un revenu). A decline of the petrol price could be dramatic for the mexican (majuscule) economy.
    On an other side, the rising crime rate, adding to the corruptions scandals, encouraged the Mexican population to vote for a candidate who had ideas they couldn’t bear in the past. It is the consequence of an political and economic instability. Adding to this the(construction. soit on a un déterminant de trop, soit il manque un nom ou une virgule) NAFTA uncertainty, the foreign direct investments went from 2.7 to 2.2 (unité?) in 2017.



    Réponse : Mexique/Résumé de dadoush35, postée le 15-01-2019 à 10:51:34 (S | E)
    Bonjour! Merci beaucoup pour votre aide, je vous envoie mon texte avec les corrections effectuées

    Mexico has an A4 country risk cotation.
    With the new American president, Mexico risks losing a major business partner. It is dependent on the USA, and risks leaving the NAFTA (North American Free Trade Agreement) over the next years, because its position is currently being negotiated. Leaving this trade bloc means losing its advantages (in terms of tariffs for example) to do trade with Canada and the United States, the US represent the major import and export partner of Mexico.
    The growth decreased by 1.9% in the last two years and should decline even more due to the violent earthquake from last year, provocating reconstructions. It will also cause the increase of the budget deficit.
    The deficient educative system and infrastructure are also a negative aspect of the country.
    Mexico is dependent of the petrol sector, it represents 30% of the government income. A decline of the petrol price could be dramatic for the Mexican economy.
    On an other side, the rising crime rate, adding to the corruptions scandals, encouraged the Mexican population to vote for a candidate who had ideas they couldn’t bear in the past. It is the consequence of a political and economic instability. Adding to the NAFTA uncertainty, the foreign direct investments went from 2.7 to 2.2% in 2017.

    Merci encore!

    Bonne journée



    Réponse : Mexique/Résumé de gerondif, postée le 15-01-2019 à 16:35:56 (S | E)
    Bonjour
    Mexico has an A4 country risk cotation.
    With the new American president, Mexico risks losing a major business partner. It is dependent on the USA, and risks leaving the NAFTA (North American Free Trade Agreement) over the next few years, because its position is currently being negotiated. Leaving this trade bloc means (would mean irait mieux) losing its advantages (in terms of tariffs for example) to do trade with Canada and the United States, the US represent the major (the main) import and export partner of Mexico.

    The growth decreased by 1.9% in the last two years and should decline even more due to the violent earthquake from last year, provocating reconstructions. It will also cause the increase of the budget deficit.

    The deficient educative system and infrastructures(pluriel) are also a negative aspect of the country.
    Mexico is dependent of(on) the petrol sector, it represents 30% of the government income. A decline of the petrol price could be dramatic for the Mexican economy.
    On an other side,(d('autre part peut se dire aussi moreover) the rising crime rate, adding to (ou added to) the corruptions scandals, encouraged the Mexican population to vote for a candidate who had ideas they couldn’t bear in the past. It is the consequence of a political and economic instability. Adding to (added to?) the NAFTA uncertainty, the foreign direct investments went from 2.7 to 2.2% in 2017.




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