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Message de ajanim16 posté le 06-04-2007 à 17:58:07 (S | E | F | I)
Voici une petite rédaction que j'ai rédigée cette après-midi en réaction à un cours d'anglais sur le film "Super Size me".
J'espère avoir quelques réactions sur telle ou telle partie du texte, pas la peine de vous déranger à tout expliquer, je vous poste la rédaction entière pour savoir s'il n'y a pas de trop grosses erreurs...notamment de synthaxe et de conjugaison!
Do you believe the cultural situation shown in « super size me » could replicate itself in France ?
Why did Morgan Spurlock realize « Super size me » in 2004 ? One has no cause to think that it is only to seem the Macdonald’s expansion. The film has been produced in United States of America. The issue at stake here is a film on american’s consommation.
Each day, one american on four eats in this restaurant. 37 porcents of teenagers and children are touched by obesity. Furthermore, it is not a fact revealed in France or in other European’s country. So we should examine the cause allowing to focus attention upon the far-reaching implications by that cultural situation. Will we be able to believe like several nobodies in Super Size me? One has to weigh the pros and cons to throw light on a burning issue.
It is the worth first of all turning one’s attention to differences which opposes american’s culture against the frenches situation.
Here, there aren’t same menus, they are more little. These later costs as much as a super size menus in USA. For instance, a child in USA eats each time the largest menu available in our country. Over and above that, we are maybe more traditionnal than an American because a part of french’population refuses to eat macdonald’s on the grounds that there is GMO in food. Therefore, it exists a boycott by several associations to fight against the expansion of this multinational firm.
The overall picture shows that a similar problem like in USA isn’t actual in France. Nonetheless, it is not beyond the bond of possibility that macdonald’s is responsible of some events. Today, there are 10 porcents of french touched by obesity and one little french on three stays so big. Our lunches are often short et we must eat
quickly what is at the root of new Macdonald’s. There are more and more. In short, we are submit by market economy which lead us to consume.
Modifié par bridg le 06-04-2007 18:02