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    rédaction à corriger
    Message de rowenna posté le 24-04-2007 à 09:22:24 (S | E | F | I)

    bonjour,
    J'ai une rédaction à faire à la maison merci de me la corriger

    I was late getting back home
    I had promised my mother I'd be home at exactly 7 o'clock.
    I walked quickly.

    There didn't seem to be anybody else on the street.
    I didn't see him.
    I was completely unaware of the person who suddenly appeared.
    He was a tall man, who wore black clothes:black trousers, black teeshirt and black hair and redden eyes. He looked really strange.
    He was a tall man with black trousers, a black teeshirt, and black hair. He looked really strange.
    I hurt him, I apologized for having hurt him. He began to shout, I apologized again for having hurt him.
    Not realizing he was there, I bumped into him. I apologized. He began to shout angrily. I apologized again for bumping into him.

    He moved towards me in a threatening manner. My eyes caught the glint of a knife he was taking out of his trouser pocket.

    I shouted because by then, I was very afraid. i had legs like cotton wool
    I shouted again, he continued to go to me.
    I continued to yell. I was in a complete state of panic as he continued to menace me.
    I shouted again, I was panicked.I took to my's heels.
    Still calling for help, I started to run.
    I saw a policeman, so I shouted "Help! Help!"
    I added:"I was following by a man , he was mad, he had a knife, this man pursued me! Help me!!"
    I told him I was being followed and threatened by a strange man. "He's mad," I said. "And he has a knife. He won't stop coming after me. Please help me!
    The cop took his walkie-talkie and called the police stati
    Then he took his billy club and shouted, "Stop! Police'
    I was crying as I walked behind the policeman.

    A squad car arrived, and several cops got out and arrested the man
    When I saw this fiend being arrested, I stopped crying
    The policeman was very solicitous as he spoke to me
    He said kindly, "Don't be afraid. That guy was crazy or a drug addict. You can go back home now, young lady. You don't have to be scared anymore
    When I reached my house, I had never been so relieved to be back home.
    And from then on, I was always a lot more careful about strangers whatever their appearance particularly in the evening when I was alone



    Réponse: rédaction à corriger de rowenna, postée le 25-04-2007 à 11:59:07 (S | E)
    too late!!!
    why is there so difficult to make herself help by another member? How can we progress with any aid?




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