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Message de sabina24 posté le 21-02-2008 à 08:39:13 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,Est - ce que vous pouvez corriger mon paragrphe au présent simple et mes phrases aussi s'il vous plait.
Firstly,Iwake up at 7.00 and i wish my faceand clean my mouth.then,i make my room.next,i have breakfast at 8.00.afterthat, i wear my clothe.
Finally,i go always my office layer at8.30.
thanks advance.
mes phrases suivates;
-Ilike my job.
-My sister likes her job.
-My sister works from 8.00to 12.00.
-Iam prepare a lunch.
-Ilove my friend.
-I respect my friend but he hates me.
-my friend forget me forever.
-Iam promise to my friend when i get a some money i will send his by western union.
I always call to my friend because he is sicks.
I hope to help my friend because he is verry poor.
merçci sabina.
Message de sabina24 posté le 21-02-2008 à 08:39:13 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,Est - ce que vous pouvez corriger mon paragrphe au présent simple et mes phrases aussi s'il vous plait.
Firstly,Iwake up at 7.00 and i wish my faceand clean my mouth.then,i make my room.next,i have breakfast at 8.00.afterthat, i wear my clothe.
Finally,i go always my office layer at8.30.
thanks advance.
mes phrases suivates;
-Ilike my job.
-My sister likes her job.
-My sister works from 8.00to 12.00.
-Iam prepare a lunch.
-Ilove my friend.
-I respect my friend but he hates me.
-my friend forget me forever.
-Iam promise to my friend when i get a some money i will send his by western union.
I always call to my friend because he is sicks.
I hope to help my friend because he is verry poor.
merçci sabina.
Réponse: corrigez moi de tomtom1001, postée le 21-02-2008 à 11:41:46 (S | E)
hello,
Je ne sais pas si tu préfère que je te réponde en anglais ou en français... donc j'ai mis les deux!!
I don't know if you prefer english answers or french answers... so I write the both!!
Firstly, I wake up at 7.00
(1) and i wish(2) my face and I clean my mouth. Then, I make(3) my room(4). Next, I have breakfast at 8.00(1). After that, I wear my clothes(5).Finally, I go
(6) always(7) my office layer(8) at 8.30(1).-I like my job.
-My sister likes her job.
-My sister works from 8.00 to 12.00.
-I am prepare
(9) a lunch.-I love my friend.
-I respect my friend but he hates me.
-my friend forget me forever
(10).-I am promise
(9) to my friend when I get (11).-I always call
(12) he is sicks.-I hope to help my friend because he is ver
1-Quand tu écris une heure, pense à écrire a.m. si c'est la matin ou p.m si c'est l'après-midi!!
When you write an hours... thinf of writing a.m if it's the morning, or p.m. if it is the afternoon!!
2-"to wish" = "souhaiter"
"to wash" = "laver"
3-"make" est mal employé... cherches plutôt la traduction du verbe "ranger"
"make" is misused... try the translation for "ranger"
4-C'est le lieu où tu dors donc "bedroom"
This is the room where you sleep so it is "bedroom"
5-Je pense que cette expression est fausse... essayes avec la traduction de "s'habiller"
I think this isn't the right expression... try with the translation for "s'habiller"
6-"aller" = "to go TO"
7-Les adverbes de fréquence se placent toujours entre le sujet et le verbe (sauf exception!!)
Frequency adverbs are ALWAYS placed between the subject and its verb (except exceptions!!!)
8-Que veut tu dire par "layer"?? Je ne comprend pas!!
What do you mean by "layer"??? I don't understand!!
9-C'est le présent progressif donc "BE + verbe + ING"
It's the progressive present so we use "BE + verb + ING"
10-On dit soit "my friend forgot (prétérit) me forever" soit "my friend always forget me"!!
We say either "my friend forgot (preterit) me forever" or "my friend always forget me"!!
11-Je ne comprend pas ce que tu veux dire!!
I don't understand what you mean!!
12-"because" est mal employé... essayes avec "when"
"because" is misused... try with "when"
I hope I helped you!!!!
See you soon... bye
tomtom
Réponse: corrigez moi de miter, postée le 21-02-2008 à 13:36:34 (S | E)
Firstly, I wake up at 7.00(1) and i wish(2) my face and I clean my mouth. Then, I make(3) my room(4). Next, I have breakfast at 8.00(1). After that, I wear my clothes(5).
Finally, I go(6) always(7) my office layer(8) at 8.30(1).
-I like my job.
-My sister likes her job.
-My sister works from 8.00 to 12.00.
-I am prepare(9) a lunch.
-I love my friend.
-I respect my friend but he hates me.
-my friend forget me forever(10).
-I am promise(9) to my friend when I get a some money I will send his him by western union(11).
-I always phone
to my friend because(12) he is sick. -I hope to help my friend because he is very poor.
I send you a correction of your text
Firstly I wake up at 7.00A.M,I wash my face and clean my mouth.
Then,I tidy up my room and have a breakfast at 8AM. After that,I put on my clothes.
Finally, I go to my lawyer office at 8 AM
(9)-I promised to my friend, when I'll get some money, I'll send it him
Excuse me it's the first time I correct a text.
Is it what you want?
Friendly.
Miter
Réponse: corrigez moi de cami84, postée le 21-02-2008 à 13:46:59 (S | E)
Hello,
According with the corrections above I let myself make some corrections.
3. arranger la chambre: To arrange the bedroom so " I arrange my bedroom"
5. s`habiller: to dress up so " I dress up. It`s not necesarly say " my clothes".
6-7-8. je penses que tu veux dire avocat donc c`est "lawyer" so, I always go to my office lawyer
9. There, it is not simple present but simple past, so " I promised to my friend"
11. I will send it to him by western union
Good luck,
Cami
Réponse: corrigez moi de sabina24, postée le 22-02-2008 à 14:20:44 (S | E)
Bonjour, d'abord je vous remerçie beaucoup pour tes remarques son oublier mes aimes:Tomtom1001,Miter et Camie84.
j'ai corriger mes fautes et voilla:
Good Morninig,Firtly i want to thanks veru much(POUR tes remarques).without forget my friends Tomtom1001,Miter and Cami84.
Ihave correct my faults and here is:
Firstly, i wake up at 7000 a.m and i wash my face and clean my mouth.then, i make the bed or( I can say, i tidy a bed,and another example-My mother is making the bed.).next i have breakfast at 8.00 a.m afterthat, i put on my dress..and i can say i have on my dress.finally always i go to my office layer at 8.30a.m.
Mes phrases suivantes;
-Ilike mu job.2-My sister likes her job.-My sister works form 8.00a.m to 12.00 p.m.-Iam prepare a lunch.-I respect my friend but he hates me.-My friend forget me froever!!or My friend always forget me!!(THANK YOU TOMTOM1001).
-Ipromissed to my friend,when I'll get some money,I'll send it him(thank you miter).-Alawys, i call to my friend because he is verry poor.
j'ai modifie ce qui m'était pas bon,est-ce mieux?j'attends tes remarques mes aimies.
Merci
Réponse: corrigez moi de tomtom1001, postée le 22-02-2008 à 14:44:23 (S | E)
You're welcome... we're here to help each other!!!
Firstly, i wake up at 7.00 a.m and i wash my face and clean my mouth. then, i make the bed
.next i have breakfast at 8.00 a.m afterthat, i Mes phrases suivantes;
I- like my job.
2-My sister likes her job.
-My sister works from 8.00a.m to 12.00 p.m. (Are you sure??? "12H00 p.m." = "midnight"!!!
)-Iam preparing a lunch. forme progressive = "be + verbe + ING"
-I respect my friend but he hates me.
-My friend forget me froever!! or My friend always forget me!!
-I promissed to my friend, when I'll get some money, I'll send it him.
-I always call to my friend because he is ver
If you have some other question, It will be with great pleasure that I'll answer you (euh... if I know the answer!!!
)Bye tomtom
Réponse: corrigez moi de sabina24, postée le 22-02-2008 à 16:30:26 (S | E)
Hi again Tomtom1001,thank you very much and you can send me synoyme of wear and to arrange.please tomtom1007 it's true when i said -I always wear jean.or i jean up.
please ,help me because iam very bad in english.and i have a poem in english.
i am a fraid if send it.in this site. may be you or anther person. can't undrestand me.
sabina
thank you and all person.
Réponse: corrigez moi de tomtom1001, postée le 22-02-2008 à 17:05:01 (S | E)
coucou,
SO "to wear": to clothe, to dress (up), to apparel (formal)
"to arrange"; to tidy, to rank, to classify
but watch out when you use them!!!!
I always wear jeans!!! it's always plural!!!
bye
Réponse: corrigez moi de violet91, postée le 22-02-2008 à 18:24:45 (S | E)
Si vous avez bien DEUX jambes .....facile à mémoriser :pants , shorts,bermudas, pyjamas, knickers.,tights,trousers.and jeans.
Réponse: corrigez moi de violet91, postée le 22-02-2008 à 18:37:28 (S | E)
Ne jamais oublier le "s" à la 3ème personne du singulier du présent simple ;
Does he ever forget you ?No,my friend never forgets me !
Yes ,my friend always forgets me ! (ce n'est un ami,alors).
Un oubli pareil coûte très cher en devoir et examen !...Attention aussi à l'orthographe.
Réponse: corrigez moi de sabina24, postée le 22-02-2008 à 20:14:48 (S | E)
Thank God and Thank you very much Tomtom and Violet91,so Ican say;Iapparel dress, Ithink It's fault!!!!!
Please send me sentence with to apparel,...ect.
It's true when I say Iam arranging a house.Or Iam organizing a living room.
Sorry, Ifind a difficulty..and I can't write correct sentences with these words are;to arrange,to rank,to classifly and to tidy.
j'attends tes réponses
merçi beaucoup
sabina.
Réponse: corrigez moi de sabina24, postée le 23-02-2008 à 09:01:09 (S | E)
Bonjour,
S'il vous plaît, j'attends la correction et merci d'avance.
sabina
Réponse: corrigez moi de sabina24, postée le 23-02-2008 à 18:29:58 (S | E)
bonsoir à tous comment exprimer les mots to arrange,to rank,to tidy, to dress
and to classifly.dans des phrases en anglais
merçi.
sabina
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