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    'Merrick' Correction
    Message de biohazard31 posté le 02-05-2008 à 17:04:59 (S | E | F)

    J'ai traduit ce texte en anglais, pouvez-vous m'aider à le corriger?
    Merci d'avance

    Texte:

    At the hospital Merrick had his own room and was very comfortable.

    Doctor Treves entered the room and announced him, that he had to find a solution to help him, Merrick was going to
    undergo an operation which would make him less deformed, and less monstrous.

    Merrick was satisfied, he could then out of the hospital and live his life more comfortably, without that the others turns around an him on the street.

    Merrick was in the habit of undergoing the mockeries and shout them with horror, he was near in everything fog changed.
    The doctor had prevent him of the risk, but Merrick had to lose nothing all that he wanted it was a new physical apparance.

    Two weeks later the operation had taken place well and Merrick rerelease transformed, his deformities had disappeared, he could better walked, but he was still sad has to speak.

    The next day the princess he visited, she found him transformed and felt at once something for him, Merrick also had feelings for her so that she can take charge of him and to help him has to resume a normal life.

    Six months later the society learnt that Merrick and the princess was together, and everybody was satisfied for them,
    Now Merrick was so happy!

    Et voici le texte en Français:

    A l'hôpital, Merrick avait sa chambre propre et était très à l'aise.

    Le docteur Treves entra dans la pièce et lui annonça qu'il avait trouver une solution pour l'aider, Merrick allait subir une opération qui le rendrait moins difforme, et moins monstrueux.

    Merrick était content, il pourrait alors sortir de l'hôpital et vivre sa vie plus confortablement, sans que les autres se retourne sur lui dans la rue.

    Merrick avait l'habitude de subir les moqueries et les cries d'horreur, il était près à tout pour changé. Le docteur l'avait prévenu du risque, mais Merrick n'avait rien à perdre tout ce qu'il voulait c'était une nouvelle apparence physique.

    Deux semaines plus tard l'opération s'était bien passé et Joseph Merrick ressortais transformé, ses difformités avait disparu, il pouvait mieux marché, mais il avait encore du mal a parler.

    Le lendemain la princesse lui rendu visite, elle le trouva transformé et ressenti tout de suite quelque chose pour lui, Merrick avait aussi des sentiments pour elle, la princesse proposa de l'installé chez elle pour qu'elle puisse s'occuper de lui et pour l'aider a reprendre une vie normal.

    Six mois plus tard la société apprit que Merrick et la princesse était ensemble, et tout le monde était content pour eux, Merrick était maintenant heureux.

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    Modifié par biohazard31 le 02-05-2008 21:37

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    Modifié par biohazard31 le 02-05-2008 22:15

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    Modifié par biohazard31 le 02-05-2008 22:29


    Réponse: 'Merrick' Correction de lucile83, postée le 02-05-2008 à 17:17:58 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    In the hospital Merrick had his own room and was very comfortable.

    The Doctor Treves entered in the room and announced him that he had to find a solution to help him, Merrick was going to
    undergo an operation wich would make hum less deformities, and less monstrous.

    Merrick was satisfied, he could then take out of the hospital and live his life more comfortably, without... (that the others turns around an him)... in the street.

    Merrick was in the habit of undergoing the mockeries and shout...?... them with horror, he was near in everything fog changed.....???
    The doctor had prevented him of the risk, but Merrick had to lose nothing all that he wanted it was a new physical apparence.

    Two weeks later the operation had taken place well and Merrick rereleased transformed, his deformities had disappeared, he could better walked, but he was still sad ..has to speak????.

    The next day the princess he visited, her found him transformed and felt at once something for him, Merrick also had feelings for her so that she can take charge of him and to help him has to resume a normal life.

    Six months later the society learnt that Merrick and the princess was together, and everybody was satisfied for them,
    Now Merrick was so happy!

    Beaucoup de fautes et trop de mot à mot.Oubliez votre dictionnaire et corrigez de façon à ce que cela devienne compréhensible.
    Courage


    Réponse: 'Merrick' Correction de lucile83, postée le 02-05-2008 à 22:03:13 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    Je reprends votre texte initial que vous avez corrigé:

    In hospital Merrick had his own room and was very comfortable.

    Doctor Treves entered at room and announced him that he had to find a solution to help him, Merrick was going to
    undergo an operation wich made him less deformities, and less monstrous.

    Merrick was satisfied, he could then..... out of the hospital and live his life more comfortably, without (that the others turns around an him on the street...phrase à re-construire)

    Merrick was in the habit of undergoing the mockeries and shout them with horror, he was near in everything fog changed...je ne comprends pas ce que vous voulez dire
    The doctor had prevent him of the risk, but Merrick had to lose nothing; all that he wanted it was a new physical apparance.

    Two weeks later the operation had taken place well and Merrick rerelease transformed, his deformities had disappeared, he could better walked, but he was still sad (has to speakque voulez-vous dire?).

    The next day the princess he visited, she found him transformed and felt at once something for him, Merrick also had feelings for her so that she can take charge of him and to help him has.. to resume a normal life.

    Six months later the society learnt that Merrick and the princess was together, and everybody was satisfied for them,
    Now Merrick was so happy!

    Fautes d'orthographe,de grammaire que vous pouvez corriger.
    See you


    Réponse: 'Merrick' Correction de lucile83, postée le 02-05-2008 à 22:43:41 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    Avec le texte français je comprends mieux ce que vous vouliez dire

    At the hospital Merrick had his own room and was very comfortable.

    Doctor Treves entered the room and announced him that he had to find a solution to help him, Merrick was going to
    undergo an operation which made him less deformed, and less monstruous.

    Merrick was satisfied, he could then leave the hospital and live his life more comfortably, without being looked at by the others in the street.

    Merrick was in the habit of undergoing the mockeries and horror shriekings , he was ready for a complete change.
    The doctor had warned him of the risk, but Merrick had to lose nothing; all that he wanted it was a new physical appearance.

    Two weeks later the operation was all right and Merrick was transformed, his deformities had disappeared, he could walk better, but it was still difficult for him to speak.

    The next day the princess visited him, she found him transformed and felt at once something for him, Merrick also had feelings for her so she could take charge of him and help him has to begin a normal life.

    Six months later the society learnt that Merrick and the princess were living together, and everybody was satisfied for them,
    Now Merrick was so happy!
    See you




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