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    Message de doggie posté le 20-09-2008 à 14:09:45 (S | E | F)

    Bonjour,
    J'ai un texte à corriger s'il vous plaît.

    Dear Diary,
    How are you ? I hope you are fine. Today was a great one ! I started school at ten beacause my italian teacher was absent I've a test in Latin. I manage doing it. I think I will have a good mark ! After having lunch, I went to school as usual. I got a test in French and in "ASB". Finally, I had an English lesson. I found some girls nasty today. They annoy XXXXX, my best friend. I was tired. I think it's because it was the end of the week.
    See you soon,
    XXXXX

    Merci beaucoup
    Doggie




    Réponse: Dear diary, de lucile83, postée le 20-09-2008 à 16:30:03 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    Dear Diary,
    How are you ? I hope you are fine. Today was a great one ! I started school at ten beacause my italian teacher was absent..... I've a test in Latin. I manage doing it. I think I will have a good mark ! After having lunch, I went to school as usual. I got a test in French and in "ASB". Finally, I had an English lesson. I found some girls nasty today. They annoy XXXXX, my best friend. I was tired. I think it's because it was the end of the week.
    See you soon,

    = faute; la présentation laisse à désirer aussi.
    See you


    Réponse: Dear diary, de doggie, postée le 20-09-2008 à 17:07:18 (S | E)
    beaucoup

    CORRECTION :

    Dear Diary,
    How are you ? I hope you are fine. Today was a great one ! I started school at ten because my Italian teacher was absent.I've a test in Latin. I manage doing it. I think I will have a good mark ! After having lunch, I went to school as usual. I got a test in French and in "ASB". Finally, I had an English lesson. I found some girls nasty today. They annoyed XXXXX, my best friend. I was tired. I think it's because it was the end of the week.
    See you soon,
    XXXXX

    Est-ce correct ?
    Encore merci lucile83 pour votre correction
    Doggie





    Réponse: Dear diary, de lucile83, postée le 20-09-2008 à 17:25:37 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    Dear Diary,
    How are you ? I hope you are fine. Today was a great one ! I started school at ten because my Italian teacher was absent.I've a test in Latin. I manage doing it. I think I will have a good mark ! After having lunch, I went to school as usual. I got a test in French and in "ASB". Finally, I had an English lesson. I found some girls nasty today. They annoyed XXXXX, my best friend. I was tired. I think it's because it was the end of the week.

    Still 3 mistakes as I forgot 2 of them



    Réponse: Dear diary, de intrepid34, postée le 20-09-2008 à 18:24:14 (S | E)
    Bonjour!

    Seemingly a few more!
    D'abord on ne demande pas si un journal va bien .... enfin...

    Today was great because I started school at 10 as my Italian teacher was away.
    I had a test in Latin and I managed to finish it. I think I will get a good mark. After lunch, I went to school at the usual time and had a test in French and "ASB". Finally I had English. I found that some of the girls were nasty today, they were annoying my best friend - maybe I was just tired as this happened at the end of the week.

    Good luck!

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    Modifié par lucile83 le 20-09-2008 18:31
    Il est préférable d'indiquer les fautes et non de corriger, vous le savez depuis que vous êtes sur le site !
    Cordialement.


    Réponse: Dear diary, de doggie, postée le 20-09-2008 à 18:24:38 (S | E)
    pour les deux erreurs en plus

    2ème CORRECTION :
    Bonjour,
    Dear Diary,
    How are you ? I hope you are fine. Today was a great one ! I started school at ten because my Italian teacher was absent.I had a test in Latin. I managed to do it. I think I will have a good mark ! After lunch, I went to school as usual. I got a test in French and in "ASB". Finally, I had an English lesson. I found some girls nasty today. They annoyed XXXXX, my best friend. I was tired. I think it's because it was the end of the week.

    Merci encore !
    Doggie


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    Modifié par doggie le 20-09-2008 18:28

    Merci pour la propsition proposée mais ça change un peu mon texte...
    Mais !!! Doggie


    Réponse: Dear diary, de lucile83, postée le 20-09-2008 à 18:36:16 (S | E)
    Bonjour,
    Dear Diary,
    How are you ? I hope you are fine. Today was a great one ! I started school at ten because my Italian teacher was absent.I had a test in Latin. I managed to take it. I think I will have a good mark ! After lunch, I went to school as usual. I got a test in French and in "ASB". Finally, I had an English lesson. I found some girls nasty today. They annoyed XXXXX, my best friend. I was tired. I think it's because it was the end of the week.

    Good work !


    Réponse: Dear diary, de doggie, postée le 20-09-2008 à 18:37:36 (S | E)
    Merci pour les répondes données
    Doggie




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